It's a nice story line especially the part of Elizabeth who tries to blow up her house because of the atomic bomb she's building or stuff. The grammar is nice but I find it a bit chaotic, trying to differentiate the characters and povs. I don't know when sean is speaking or when authur or Emma is speaking. I hope the author make out time to make their characters more understandable. Other than that, I think I like emma's character. She's a strong character. And there storyline is nice. Good job author.

I must say I'm impressed author. No grammatical errors and I love how the character are built. Their attitudes and skills. Feels to me, I'm watching a pirate movie. I have always been into pirate moves but this is the first transmigration novel I have ever read and I must say, I like it. It's nice and I like the flow. I'm still reading tho. Everything is nice and in accordance but I'm not much into magic or occult stuff but I will make an exception to this lol. fighting author💪💪💪[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Really? Did Bastian take it?

I like the beginning of the story. For the first time myself was reflected through seb and also I love pirate novels🥰 Good one author

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I love the story, love the eldest son prince. I like his character, I feel he's a nice prince. But also I feel for Charlotte🥺🥺🥺 and despise her family, especially Hayden. I love the story, it's a captivating story🥰

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Nice quotes from Maltida

I love how the author described everything, it felt like I was watching a movie and yes I already love Miguel's character[img=fp]

I wonder who these twins are and what they have in common

Nice, I could feel the agony the female lead is going through

in her dream🤣 when that unknown man called her Jane.

Sorry guys, I'm really sorry I left you guys hanging. I will start updating very soon.

I know you are one of my loyal readers, I'm so sorry to keep you waiting. I will start updating very soon.

Awwww sorry, I will make it up to you guys. I will start updating real soon

I will update you real soon. I'm sorry to keep you all waiting

There is, I'm so sorry I kept you all waiting. I got so got up in real life but I promise to start updating real soon. Sorry guys☺

Nice work author-nim, sincerely speaking. it got me hooked, I felt the boy's emotional pains. I wondered how he survived through his elementary school days without being mentally unstable. I'm still reading author and I must say I like the storyline

nice work author, I like the way you started you beginning. it's so captivating, wanting to know more. Who the girl is and why she's found in a cave. I just love the beginning of the story. it's so mysterious. Keep writing author-nim