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LordNephilim

LordNephilim

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2020-02-24 JoinedUnited States
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  • LordNephilim
    LordNephilim1mth
    Replied to Creativityiskey

    I'm really sorry...I should have communicated better and at least gotten myself to push out a chapter like every other week if not more so that's all my bad.

    Ch 30 Surprise I'm Not Dead
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  • LordNephilim
    LordNephilim4mth
    Replied to Creativityiskey

    Thank you for your understanding I really appreciate it and it's going good so far. It's only temporary as I've been brought on as an independent contractor till the job is finished but it's good money so I have no complaints. Anyway thank you and everyone else who supports me and this book as it means a lot to me. I'm not sure if I wanna tie this down to this app or expand onto other platforms in time but Ik I'm not giving up on this till it's reached the conclusion I vision for it so again please bear with me and I'll keep creating a story I love and that hopefully all of you will love as well. Maybe one day when I have the income for it I'll find an artist to hire on to help me make a webtoon/comic out of this for everyone to visually enjoy along with reading.

    Ch 29 28: The Start of The Lizard War
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  • LordNephilim
    LordNephilim5mth
    Replied to Creativityiskey

    I know riiiiight, I'll do my best not to disappoint on the reveal and what comes after.

    Ch 28 27: Classes & War
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  • LordNephilim
    LordNephilim5mth
    Replied to Creativityiskey

    I really thought about it and it is my personal favorite of them but it's slightly off with the eye color and how overly spiky he is which was the reference of "Lizardman Godzilla" lol.

    Grukthar was appalled at the gall his daughter had to say that while James could easily kill her right now and to speak such blasphemy and ignore the hierarchy right in front of them both. James just laughed and took his knee off of her and picked her up princess carry before putting her down on her feet which in that brief moment of being in his arms like that Xarzak could help but notice her heart was beating faster and her face was getting flushed and the tip of her tail was wagging but chose to ignore it yet James noticed two of the three but chose to ignore it right now as she obviously didn't trust him. She was obviously beautiful by Lizardfolk standard as she stood at 6ft but had a more lean and agile figure but obviously had her more feminine curves and since the Lizardfolk had very primitive cloth clothing only her precious places were covered but her assets were obviouse to see as she had decently large but perky breasts that were admittedly smaller than Romania's but nonetheless eye catching around what James would see as in the middle of C cup versus Romania's Double D's and she had wide hips with thick thighs and a slightly large jiggly but somewhat firm ass due to her scales which these assets were the only things that betrayed her otherwise lean muscled figure from her many battles and hunts as she had a couple scars on her arms and legs some cuts and claws a couple being bite marks, alongside her Amethyst scales she had deep blue eyes that almost mirrored the sea and like the James now she has a small horn just above ber snout but she also had two others further up in her head and many small spikes that ran down her spine ending at the tip of her tail that looked more like a scythed blade compared to other Lizardfolk which all together made it obvious she either had a strong mutation or had inherited more traits and the bloodline from her more than likely draconic ancestors.
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  • LordNephilim
    LordNephilim5mth
    Replied to Creativityiskey

    This one specifically for now since it's the closest to his description and doesn't make him just seem like Lizardman Godzilla but even then I love them all.

    Grukthar was appalled at the gall his daughter had to say that while James could easily kill her right now and to speak such blasphemy and ignore the hierarchy right in front of them both. James just laughed and took his knee off of her and picked her up princess carry before putting her down on her feet which in that brief moment of being in his arms like that Xarzak could help but notice her heart was beating faster and her face was getting flushed and the tip of her tail was wagging but chose to ignore it yet James noticed two of the three but chose to ignore it right now as she obviously didn't trust him. She was obviously beautiful by Lizardfolk standard as she stood at 6ft but had a more lean and agile figure but obviously had her more feminine curves and since the Lizardfolk had very primitive cloth clothing only her precious places were covered but her assets were obviouse to see as she had decently large but perky breasts that were admittedly smaller than Romania's but nonetheless eye catching around what James would see as in the middle of C cup versus Romania's Double D's and she had wide hips with thick thighs and a slightly large jiggly but somewhat firm ass due to her scales which these assets were the only things that betrayed her otherwise lean muscled figure from her many battles and hunts as she had a couple scars on her arms and legs some cuts and claws a couple being bite marks, alongside her Amethyst scales she had deep blue eyes that almost mirrored the sea and like the James now she has a small horn just above ber snout but she also had two others further up in her head and many small spikes that ran down her spine ending at the tip of her tail that looked more like a scythed blade compared to other Lizardfolk which all together made it obvious she either had a strong mutation or had inherited more traits and the bloodline from her more than likely draconic ancestors.
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  • LordNephilim
    LordNephilim5mth
    Replied to Creativityiskey

    It's very cute and super cool. It's not quite Xarzak as she's more muscle toned and her eyes now match her scales but it's not that far off that I still really like it. Again I really appreciate this stuff so thank you for doing this even if the generator isn't exactly cooperative.

    Grukthar was appalled at the gall his daughter had to say that while James could easily kill her right now and to speak such blasphemy and ignore the hierarchy right in front of them both. James just laughed and took his knee off of her and picked her up princess carry before putting her down on her feet which in that brief moment of being in his arms like that Xarzak could help but notice her heart was beating faster and her face was getting flushed and the tip of her tail was wagging but chose to ignore it yet James noticed two of the three but chose to ignore it right now as she obviously didn't trust him. She was obviously beautiful by Lizardfolk standard as she stood at 6ft but had a more lean and agile figure but obviously had her more feminine curves and since the Lizardfolk had very primitive cloth clothing only her precious places were covered but her assets were obviouse to see as she had decently large but perky breasts that were admittedly smaller than Romania's but nonetheless eye catching around what James would see as in the middle of C cup versus Romania's Double D's and she had wide hips with thick thighs and a slightly large jiggly but somewhat firm ass due to her scales which these assets were the only things that betrayed her otherwise lean muscled figure from her many battles and hunts as she had a couple scars on her arms and legs some cuts and claws a couple being bite marks, alongside her Amethyst scales she had deep blue eyes that almost mirrored the sea and like the James now she has a small horn just above ber snout but she also had two others further up in her head and many small spikes that ran down her spine ending at the tip of her tail that looked more like a scythed blade compared to other Lizardfolk which all together made it obvious she either had a strong mutation or had inherited more traits and the bloodline from her more than likely draconic ancestors.
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  • LordNephilim
    LordNephilim5mth
    Replied to Creativityiskey

    These are all amazing and even though it was created through an ai generator I will ask you for permission to use one of them as the current description for James cause they are gorgeous and as much as Id' love to use all of them only one really works with the current him since eventually he will change as he evolves and when that time comes if I haven't already commissioned someone for art for him so you all have a better picture of the main cast of characters as time goes on I would love any and all fan art and ai generated stuff you'd all share.

    "I guess I should get situated with my new body", James looks at himself and he's a lot bigger than he thought he'd be compared to what he saw on video games, James' Lizardman body is 7ft 9in tall with a very stout/built body weighing at 310lbs covered in scales with powerful jaws and razor-sharp teeth, he also has claws as sharp as razors along with a long tail, his scales are black in color with a blue zig zagging stripes down his body as of he has lighting running throughout him.
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  • LordNephilim
    LordNephilim5mth
    Replied to Creativityiskey

    That's my bad I wanted to get 2 done but it was a rough week and it took away from writing time. This coming week will be the same 2 released like usual though.

    Ch 26 25: Bloody Evolutions
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  • LordNephilim
    LordNephilim6mth
    Replied to Creativityiskey

    Thank you for the feedback I really appreciate that and I do apologize for my bad update schedule. I only just recently came back to it and am hoping to improve the schedule a lot more as I keep working on it.

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  • LordNephilim
    LordNephilim7mth
    Posted

    I like this story so far even with only 9 chapters and I like how the character is portrayed, how his abilities and the pacing of his strength in general is, and the fact that he's not alone from day one like most of these stories as he still has his family and a friend that could be a love interest. I can't wait to read more as chapters are released, but more importantly keep writing the story you want to write not what anyone else wants.

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  • LordNephilim
    LordNephilim7mth
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    Frankly I love this story so far, it's got good pacing, great action, the way magic is done is interesting but not overcomplicated, and the way you're using the bloodlines and magic to create new races and undead is really damn cool. I can't wait to see how this story progresses and how it'll end.

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  • LordNephilim
    LordNephilim7mth
    Replied to LordNephilim

    I still stand by this and I hope more chapters will continue to be released. Even all this time that's passed I keep supporting this book with my power stones and golden tickets because I believe in the author and in the story and world they're creating.

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  • LordNephilim
    LordNephilim1yr
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    I have really enjoyed this and hope the author comes back to it sometime soon. As an author myself that admittedly have kinda given up on my own book I really don't wanna see others let their amazing books they've made and put there heart into be abandoned and I need to get back to my own book too after the improvements to writing I've made. So wonderful author I really hope you'll come back to this book soon cause so far I've really liked it and know as long ss you take the time to make a story you enjoy that others will love it too.

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  • LordNephilim
    LordNephilim1yr
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    I have really enjoyed this novel thus far and have fallen in love with the characters and the power scaling thus far. I know there have been people who don't like the way some things were portrayed or how story was progress in certain ways, but as an author myself who was struggling and trying to advance my writing ability I really like what has bee done so far. Personally I can't wait for the new version of this book. Author please take your time to love what you write and that it's true to what you wanted. I promise you that in the end you won't regret it and people will love your book as much as I fo if not more.

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  • LordNephilim
    LordNephilim1yr
    Posted

    So far really enjoying this and enjoy the characters and the development as even for an overpowered character or system type trope it isn't over the top or boring. Overall really like this novel and can't wait for mew chapters as well as new demons to see.

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  • LordNephilim
    LordNephilim2yr
    Replied to Geee

    In a way he isn't. He remembers his first name, stuff about video games and systems, and obviously how to speak, but otherwise he doesn't remember his old life, who he was as a person along with his beliefs. So truly he isn't who he used to be at all. Almost a blank slate.

    Ch 1 Second Chances.
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  • LordNephilim
    LordNephilim2yr
    Replied to acdc2113

    I know and I'm doing what little I can to get better, but it is hard to not wanna write sometimes. I'll be sure I'm better before I push my brain and body to do the things I want. I'll be back soon though once I'm all good.

    Ch 15 <Author Note>
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    LordNephilim2yr
    Replied to TheQuickReader

    The treasure was his prized axe and the hidden ruins behind the hut with whatever lies within.

    2. Kill the chief and obtain his treasure
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    LordNephilim2yr
    Replied to TheQuickReader

    The next chapter will explain things more along with XP gains.

    Ch 15 19: A God's Blessing
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  • LordNephilim
    LordNephilim2yr
    Replied to whycantistop

    Well in a lot of the fighting with goblins he doesn't bother eating all of them and later with other meat he took from the goblins he just hasn't eaten yet to get those points and traits. Also everytime he actually gets points I go back through chapters since the last time I updates his status page and add them and subtract whatever he uses in that same period as well.

    Ch 11 10: The Temple & Going To Dragontooth
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