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A great plot ans story enjoying Lot just couple thing that the author does with the main character which annoys me everything. Is comparing himself to naruto and sauke calling then stupid. obviously he's different he has an adult mind while naruto and sasuke have a child mentailtiy I don't how u can compare them and the call them stupid where one is adult who lived in good society while naruto and sasuke experienced traumatic experienced at a young age, I love the story and the plot just get annoyed when the author always states that he's not stupid as an child well obviously
obviously he's different he has an adult mind while naruto and sasuke have a child mentailtiy I don't how u can compare them and the call them stupid where one is adult who lived in good society while naruto and sasuke experienced traumatic experienced at a young age, I love the story and the plot just get annoyed when the author always states that he's not stupid as an child well obviously
Love it already, I read 3 different versions of the novel and this one was the best one so far as well as for in the kpop genre aswell for me at least. Hope u don't drop this and continue with the story with more updates if are able to. I'll try to vote 2 power stone every day to this novel[img=recommend][img=recommend]
I just believ the chapterr was rushed, I'm enjoying it so far but he still Should check the details of the contract, he was still in his mid twenties and should now how these types of companies behave depending on his previous music career from his past life, from my perspective u should at least make more detailed then rushing the chapter, my guy met the the women for less then 30min and straight away just gave his life away to to company, I know that this is my opnion but just giving parts u can improve on. just try not to rush the important details of the story
Author u have done a good translation even they still needs work, I have read both of your translated versions and also the Chinese version and it Is another better. I'm just going to say that if u can for both series your translating if u are able to improve the story and make it non racist, such as the other work I have read up to liek 600chaps and my guy is a full hard on racist to everyone who's not a chinese, he goes to kill everyone that says something bad about China even its something small the same goes for the this current work aswell, it's a good novel but the author it just 100racist so if u can just improve that section of the novel, it will be great but you are doing a great job anyway
please Dont let the Carol be the love interest if your going to go with story it's to basic and I don't think they will be a good match, I'm just saying my opinion and this might not be wants going to happen at all I don't know I'm just giving a suggestion. but so far I have liked the series and hope u can continue
I've ready up the first 30 chapters. I like the story line so far however I really hate the character development and the female lead which is obvious, is going to to quickly and I just hate the female character and attitude shown so far obviously it could change but I can't do any thing the same thing with the male lead they basically only Known each other 5 to 7days and only met 2 to 3 times and yet the development is just to quick and the affection shown by both them and how the male lead acts towards her is just stupid in my opinion. First sight and first love is what your doing. You have shown the me lead as a kind of cold/ruthless and kind towards the people he know but that case does not work here with the female character he acts like he's known the girl for years and interacts with her stupid acts and decision like it doesn't affect him. Any way this is just my opinion. I won't be continuing this but hope u the best with the story as another author my preference is just different.
1st one I don'tike to much and I like both soa and solo leveling option as an fellow writer but I feel like solo leveling will get more attention and the small plot idea is Good for me. So I'm Going for solo leveling but I don't mind soa aswell just my opinion nerf the Abilities a little for both since the characters can go super op really qucikly and for my that genre just ruins the story for me and the plot so that it.