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I've ready up the first 30 chapters. I like the story line so far however I really hate the character development and the female lead which is obvious, is going to to quickly and I just hate the female character and attitude shown so far obviously it could change but I can't do any thing the same thing with the male lead they basically only Known each other 5 to 7days and only met 2 to 3 times and yet the development is just to quick and the affection shown by both them and how the male lead acts towards her is just stupid in my opinion. First sight and first love is what your doing. You have shown the me lead as a kind of cold/ruthless and kind towards the people he know but that case does not work here with the female character he acts like he's known the girl for years and interacts with her stupid acts and decision like it doesn't affect him. Any way this is just my opinion. I won't be continuing this but hope u the best with the story as another author my preference is just different.

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Starting With 3 S-Class Talents

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