Author u have done a good translation even they still needs work, I have read both of your translated versions and also the Chinese version and it Is another better. I'm just going to say that if u can for both series your translating if u are able to improve the story and make it non racist, such as the other work I have read up to liek 600chaps and my guy is a full hard on racist to everyone who's not a chinese, he goes to kill everyone that says something bad about China even its something small the same goes for the this current work aswell, it's a good novel but the author it just 100racist so if u can just improve that section of the novel, it will be great but you are doing a great job anyway
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