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bro is expert at consoling a child 💀

white haired +1

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his looks +1

it'll be short story maybe 100 or less chapter with every chapter at least 2.5k words, when? not anytime soon that I can assure coz I tend to put lot of work on every paragraph. I use quill bot so everytime I wrote one or two paragraphs I will correct all the grammar mistake then I will use paraphrasing tool until I got nice sounded paragraph.

I did.

Ma Hong Yun/Fei Cai

bro that fic is fire tho it's dropped, there's a gu belonged tu Thieving heaven called computer gu it's contain many of gu recipe rank 1-5, and it's kinda make sense and not out of place since THV came from some kind of mecha world. Maybe you could use that or develop some idea from that. Just a suggestion 😁

with ai being said, have you read 'Fei Cai's Ascension' ?

was her finger effect of a gu? 💀💀

sell cabbage

bro this is lit 🔥🔥🔥 the pace is amazing bro, RI fanfic tend to drop because they made it slow pace to match the RI pace but yours is good pace bro. the only downside is the speech format it would be great if you change it in the future to "..." for speaking and '...' for thought. Probably because I used to that but if you can't or you won't, it won't matter I can get past that bcoz your fanfic is fking great man. My power stone now belongs to this fic, I give it to that poison RI fic before but yeah I like this one better, I hope you won't drop it. But thanks to that poison RI fic I discovered this so yeah shout out to him although his fic is rather slow paced.