Morgrim_DarkHeart
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what is with all of the repeating chapters? I've heard of authors padding their stories before but this is just ridiculous. you have eyes I'm pretty sure you can see these are being repeated but instead refused to fix them or remove them. until they start being removed I'm going to keep my review at one star and I urge others to do the same. why be rewarded for being lazy
any tips for writing with any kind or type of filler in even chapters? also will his birth parents ever come looking for him? I mean the fact that he is a half elf with red hair and is of the correct name and comes from a place that just so happens to be down the river from the place his birthday is stuck him in the river of...?
do we really need to hide identity? like do we really need to hide it as she is already a necromancer which should not be all that great to other people and some of her companions are undead. not to mention she's on the path of probably becoming the next demon Lord so is hiding identity even necessary I really don't think so
so is this going to be the start of when she realizes that humans are not as nice as she wants them to be even the innocent ones?
first burden of many more to come that will in some way or reason become a weakness for reasons not known to us mere mortals
because he's a Duke I very much doubt they could have actually targeted or threatened his family considering his father should at least be a Duke or mother
awwww and here I was expecting a slaughter
that sounds like a great idea after all who doesn't like a nice power leveling arc?
well there goes your hope to assimilate back into human society
yay she can survive one novice spell, maybe
by that sort of weakness rank would she be killed or heavily hurt by sunlight?
I'm not even sure how to pronounce the middle name
I wonder if she'll have to defend her body? I mean she is a ghost so while bound to her body it being destroyed would mean she would die
so you went the slime and ice dragon route here, I guess we can call this the slimy ice dragon Ghost route now
there are worse ways to die
As a monster that eats the soul stones, that's also likely eating the souls of some of the soldiers
I would agree if it wasn't for the fact that there could be skills that specifically enhance arrows and bolts because they're likely is like in many RPGs
I wonder if the game disc actually does something for him if he regains it. I mean since his powers come from the game I would think that the game disc itself would Grant him some sort of power boost. or maybe a passive XP generator. so that he passively generates experience over time like 10 XP per hour or per day which isn't much but considering he is an undead and as such effectively immortal time is something he has an abundance of