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Passive Creation

A young man in America gains a system to help him in his journey to conquer and gain immortality. To reach the edge of Death and master it. To create skills or buildings or win them. Death is his to master and his to wield. Will have a evil protag (This is going to be my first real novel to write as such please don't expect any awesome writing but I always look for criticism. If you choose a stick by me I will try to give a decent story. ) PS there will be some cuss words this is just for those that need to know

Morgrim_DarkHeart · Fantasy
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the current novel and the future

Hello there readers of my wonderful novel, this is the author Morgrim Darkheart. This is a brief chapter that is going to be going over the current novel and what I have planned for the novel as of now. Currently it's going to be a little fast-paced and our protagonist is going to be quite powerful until I'm thinking around chapter 100 somewhere around there. The system is not really seen too much and I do have plans to change that as well as work on more character interaction after chapter 100.

Also before I forget I would like to thank those who have been with me since the beginning reading this novel that I honestly never thought would actually get off the ground. I honestly thought this novel would be for the most part ignored and would not actually have anybody asking for more. So it gladdens my heart to see that I was wrong. For those who found my novel later than those in the beginning I still thank you for picking up my novel as it's always wonderful to see the growth and see the comments on chapters and paragraphs. I do read those by the way, I read every single chapter comment and paragraph comment.

Now the current state of the novel will be me trying to do at least two chapters a week of 1,000 plus words as I do know that is going to be a more enjoyable amount for people to read more. As I figure out how to take the story that's in my head and put it in a way that makes sense out for you to read the chapters may increase but keep the same consistent size otherwise I could do a bunch of small chapters that are like 500 to 800 words long. But I'm pretty sure that would not be the most enjoyable of reads especially since I'm not too sure if they would even make much sense. What I will say that I'm not open to giving the novel filler as I myself hate seeing filler in novels as it seems to me to be an unnecessary amount of extra words for something that has little to no bearing on the plot. I do plan a beach chapter though but it's going to be in tandem with the novel in its way.

By the way, does anybody want to see a stat page for some of the undead/creatures under Malorn's control? I do want to ask for people to leave a review though as I am pretty curious about how many stars my novel would be. I do look at all the other novels that are recommended in accordance to mine and do wonder if I am a three-star because hell I'll take two star if I get more than one star I'll consider that a victory. one star would just mean I still have more to improve and to be honest I do.

I'm currently doing the third person type of writing which personally I don't see too much of and I understand why as you don't get into the nitty gritty thoughts of the protagonist or any of the other people in the world. I do understand how it would be a little different and how many people would possibly not like it but personally it is a more unique way of telling the story as you can get some thoughts will also coming up with your own thoughts about how the characters are thinking. Let me know your thoughts on that.

As for the future events, I am planning on having our protagonist potentially create more other system protagonists which I will then use for future novels as we saw with Jack. Although as we saw with Jack their deaths are not going to be fun for them but I hope entertaining for you.

For those wondering if the thought crossed your mind I did not forget Bill the dog as it will come to have a purpose after the next evolution in fact it might get its own evolution depending on which way a coin flips.

I also did not forget Danse, as he I will let you know in advance will be a system user and yes for those wondering his name is a fallout 4 reference.

Many of the characters you'll be meeting are going to have names and personalities like many people I have met in my life. Like the girl Rose who got really upset when her boy toy was broken. I've met many people especially having worked customer service and if you do so I think you for your work and hopefully keep as much patience as possible.

As for any of your ideas that you may have I do encourage you to say them. Who knows maybe I'll use it.

The next chapter will be coming within the next day or so and I hope you guys do enjoy it as it will come with an interesting creature. I do hope many of you have read this although you could have skipped it and I don't really care if you did but it is about the future and current matters and now I must go before I keep rambling on because that is a problem with me 😂

Enjoy till the next author chapter thing