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I never really got the whole time stop when going to other universes, it seems like much more of a hassle than just returning him to the exact time he left
That's how you meet people in a more formal setting, it's called manners and social etiquette
He can remember the page itself but the information on it was not absorbed without reading it
Fear the old in a profession where men die young
good pun
Or to spend it before they die
Is the president a robot? sure sounds like one
Man of culture
That's not how the periodic table works but, it's just a story after all
If you find yourself bored with writing cannon, then take time between the arcs for your own original mini ones, I personally think introducing HSR will make the story more convoluted and complicated than it needs to be. Some people also may not like me for saying this but if your having problems writing a lemon chapter just write a passionate scene leading up to it then say they did it and move on. Your writing quality is good and a poorly written lemon would just break the immersion. That's just my thoughts, lll read whatever you write.
Good intro but be careful when you get to this point in the story it doesn't become forced for this scene to play out.
using soru underwater would be like using geppo and soru at the same time
Will he never get his chariot? Even if it's not as powerful as in fate?And I get him not being invincible except his heel, but you could maybe make his full body armament haki really strong.
So he doesn't lose his abilities at night? That kind of sucks the fun out of Escanor, sunshine no weakness has been done a hundred times and it just turns him into a one punch man which takes all the fun out of fights. Just my opinion.
+1
All will be well.