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Nekoman2yrPostedWell first of all, I myself is not used with this writing style but I can see that its well written. Though the beginnig has a lot going on in just a few sentences that I was confused at first. I can't give any advice because I already forgot most of what a book needs to have but just a quick word, hope that the author improve (There's always room for imrpovement) and I hope this books gets a lot of reader and supporter
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yea imagine they rap... you to reproduce hehehehe, wrong story sorry
Jiok cleared his throat, "Long time ago, approximately 700 years ago, goblins were feared. We are scary looking, many in number despite our low endurance. Even dragons would move their nest if goblins invaded them. But when someone, people said the son of heaven, came down from the sky, they began to invade us. One by one, our kingdoms fall, our homes burnt down, our race crushed. The survivors became slaves or pets for the humans and because of that, we evolved. Slowly but surely, we came small and cute looking, but I knew goblin's instinct is still sharp" - Nekoman2yrReplied to gsm1r
Ah sorry, might have confused the names with my others books. Yea I'm improving :") Sorry if there are not many detail cause this book is actually rushed for a competition, you should drop it if you don't like it though
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still the beginning lol, dun worry
The old man that bought him led into the corner of the room and kicked his tummy once again. His small body bashed against the wall, his eyes looked up, only to see that the old man was slowly approaching with his fist clenched. - Nekoman2yrReplied to Arthur_Leywin1
why not lol
The only thing that was annoying was a little boy, sitting on the floor with the three little goblins, looking like they just played a little match of WWE smackdown with the boy. But what surprised him were the boy's words, "Let's play 1 round of WWE smackdown once again!" - Nekoman2yrReplied to Hugo_Smits
it's a small stream... It doesn't stay in one place, so it's pretty safe. And I to be honest don't know but yea
He got himself up and saw a shallow and small ditch right in front of his eyes; the man tripped multiple times, but never once he fell to the ground. When he was right in front of the ditch, he connected his hands and drank the water. - Nekoman2yrReplied to Lazy_Sloth_7335
Yea right, just imagine some goblins you defeated some hundred years ago as your pets. Then kidnapping people from other world to create a rebellion
Jiok cleared his throat, "Long time ago, approximately 700 years ago, goblins were feared. We are scary looking, many in number despite our low endurance. Even dragons would move their nest if goblins invaded them. But when someone, people said the son of heaven, came down from the sky, they began to invade us. One by one, our kingdoms fall, our homes burnt down, our race crushed. The survivors became slaves or pets for the humans and because of that, we evolved. Slowly but surely, we came small and cute looking, but I knew goblin's instinct is still sharp" - Nekoman2yrReplied to KnightTerror
Well idk. I wrote about the MC. Maybe the goblin kidnapper tried to kidnap amother human before?
Louis smiled, "True, you are good a striking deal, even with a nobleman! I was really disappointed when some careless and stupid-looking person. But was amazed at your capabilities! Sir Jiok really chose a great, outstanding and knowledgeable man this time!" - Nekoman2yrReplied to R34P3R
There will be gore in battle scenes as I felt it is necessary, beheading and heads on pikes and stuff. I would try to limit it though, as the novel is slow paced, meeting the new characters and finishing his missions until he did what he must.
(I'm not making this a smut for those who are wondering) - Nekoman2yrReplied to Riritsut_Kanarai
sadly i'm not the writer of that lol
"Freeze! This is the imperial department of goblins right! If anyone moves, it will be the same as obstructing the law!" Armoured men came rushing in with weapons on their hands and all the people n the room were trembling and froze at their place, including the old man. - Nekoman2yrReplied to EpithetEnjoyer
Uhh, well. He's a tactic guy, but in the battlefield. With the promise of being returned to his original world, it would make sense for him to save a race while trying a few fun in that world
He smirked, "Well, sure, but when all of this is over, I want to return to my world and possibly write a novel about this all. On top of that, I want you, to come with me!" - Nekoman2yrReplied to Actorat_Cain
lol, that might be a good idea
A great series of nets came out of the bush and covered him entirely, the next thing I saw was armoured men coming out of the bush, 3 in totals. One of them, holding a strange gun-like device said to the other, "Ahahah! This goblin didn't even run and just stared right at us! This is the type of goblin that will be pets!"