Very light story, I like the vibe a lot, one that is good for trips and when you just need to relax. I was slightly disappointed of the confusion it created, especially at chapter 2, then I realized of the multiple MC and points of view.

yummy, i like melon

Everyone hates him

Mysterious, anime like fighting and detailed descriptions. I really like the beginning and earlier chapters, introducing the world and stuff seems really good. Especially the glutton and the many variations of it. The world building is good, taking a mix of post apocalypse and monster (from what I deduced). You would find this extremely likable if you favor dark and full of monsters and struggle story. One thing that is really rare and interesting is the use of candy system lol

his mind, a dream

I must say this novel is quite interesting. Though it really lacks in writing style and clearness, I have read enough to conclude the complex and complicated plot and worldbuilding that comes with it. I'm curious if one day the story would progress into something more incredible

Ronan*

All seems good, but it may just not be for my taste that the world background gets a little confusing early on. The character design is so detailed and vivid that I can actually paint them in my mind. But its introduction seems too sudden, interrupting the flow of the story. Overall, nice story!

what is amazonian proportions?

ah its my newly form habit to introduce something new with italic so people would etch a memory of the person in their mind

Damn its eerie and dreadful, especially if you read it with the music in the background. But the paragraph are too long, something I learned that made people just barely "glance" at it. It's something good, not many's cup of tea but its really a good work of art with the vocabs, story telling and feelings

I'm the author of this book, sorry for the shameless review but if you have any questions, ask away in the paragraph or here, I'm happy to answer all of it!

They are full of tattoos (like the pagans) but wear minimum armour and a helm that resembled broe helmet with horns attached on it like vikings. Their armaments are closely attached to the viking' culture too.

left because the horse sped away, leaving him

The watchmen are a ragtag group, at first, at least. Many of its members, veterans of war, criminals, ordinary citizens with many conflicting background and personality. They stood as the first line of defence is not for the land of some nobles, but for the families and people that lives in those land. For example, if you give some random dukes the land and have them protect it, they would only hear the news of an attack on some village they probably didn't care protecting about. That's where the watchmen came in duty, first line of defense, not to defeat the enemy but stall for time, reduce unwanted, unnecessary and innocent casualties before the knights and soldiers of those noble come.

Relax it's his first day :skull:

Its a great book, but one thing that bothers me is just parts of the dialogues seems awkward, some typo here and there, problem with punctuation. Clickbaiting title tho [img=faceslap], but still a great work from the author, considering this his first

The watchman, while being a body closer to those of militias group, are actually full of experienced warriors and soldiers, since they are the first line of defense for most borders, the nobles and populace alike sponsor them. The watchman are also one of the way to gain fame, defeating the barbarian of the north, indigenous tribes of the southern desert kingdom, pirates of the eastern coast and creatures of the western mountains, proved to be an effective way to raise through fame. While for some, it served as a place of exile. Guess we never know Gregorious Trilly's connection to the watchman, as he unfortunately met his doom along with his bodyguard of knight novices (hint)

Great descriptive text but the story is kinda slow? Also the first time I read such a realistic text, not my cup of tea, regardless of that, still an amazing work of art

who is this?