30 year old in a child's body go to a school and start thinking everybody is stupid around them like I don't like ron just because he is not a cute girl not because his character

I am also using FanFiction to write my own FanFiction but I will likely strike to maintain characters to similar to movies or real life characters James can be bad Lily can't Dumbledore was bad but after making mistake with Voldemort he had corrupted most of his problems he character was always giving second chance

thank you for continue reading I will try to improve and continuous

let's see how The story goes Harry Potter world has only one meaning and that is his knowledge

I think we do need a friends it can help with depression and make sure you have decent communication skills specially when you want to share some ideas

for more girlfriends he gets or not will be related to the plot like that Bellatrix even if he had pick her it's doesn't mean he she is his girlfriend same with the greengrass even if she agree It wouldn't to go around kissing and doing the stuff MC is current goal is going to be building some special weapons specially his new magic while I don't plan to create a robot wife but getting some floating canons or some mechanical dolls will be good

that's the problem he only receive mission related to womens not to solve some dark lord but idea is good at least it could be used in another fan fiction which is pure Harry Potter of course I won't to be writing that now I already have 2 fanfictions

there is no no plan to drop the story without any medical reasons since there is no lack of Idea and suggestions the benefit of completing this novel would be I would have experience to write original story in future

thank you you can also give suggestions

okay after using translator I understand what you said and thank you very much the feedback is important since I can keep the things like by people and remove what everyone hates of course I'm necessary things needed to be kept there were lots of plots which were change like going to forbidden forest and having near death experience and coming back to Life don't lie problem in the plot is Voldemort isn't fun big shot where people might except mc dying to his hand stories changing and even I don't know what will be stories changing and even I don't know what will be the next chapter

which drawbacks are you talking about because they are lots of drawbacks 😅 I have read lots of FanFiction of Harry Potter so I thought it would be easy the only problem is MC doesn't have anything to do in this world beside learning

I will try

can't I have another novel which I am uploading around 7 chapter in entire week so don't have time for this but I will try to improve in future

yp someone else can took away your wishes then what's the point of giving them

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he is not good with women but it still can't be main focus of the story now I think really don't have a good idea what should be the focus so now I basically need something which can work for entire story line like some type of material

no do you think his current behaviour will be getting likes for many women seriously currently he can't even secure a seat with the girl 😭

you can thank the grammarly

the way to deal with the situation would be just because of his presence the villains going to try harder its mean if he doesn't intervene lots of people will die or send him to world which is equal to his strength so I could try both of these option together might be hard since I am not a very good writer

while I would like to write more chapters faster but the response isn't good enough and I am writing 2 novels it's mean I have less time with such a negative response it's hard to write multiple chapter same day