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Souen1127dCommentedI've seen this a couple times now and maybe I'm wrong, but isn't it peerage? Not Peer?
Rias Gremory: I've been training a lot with my peer lately, but I still noticed SOMETHING VERY strange, and I'm already trying to investigate it. The Perverted Trio of Kuoh seems to be behaving... normally. No more perverted talks about girls' underwear, no more attempts to peek under skirts, and no more loud discussions about porn magazines... maybe my actions somehow influenced a possible future?- Souen1121mthCommentedCh 32 Chapter 32: Mission Complete
- Souen1123mthCommented
Ahaha
"No, but if the PRT had a ranking category that conglomerates gumption, hutzpah, moxie, childlike wonder, the cut of one's jib, and a certain je ne sais quoi they'd put mine at 12+. If you all choose to believe that what I do is 'Mastering', I'll understand. You'll all be idiots, but I'll understand." - Souen1126mthCommented
Embrace the weird
Fuck a mermaid - Souen1127mthCommented
this is a good way to get yourself slapped silly
"Look, Carol, I know we haven't known each other for long, but the time we've spent together was enough for me to like you. And I don't think it's platonic. So, just this once, trust me." I said, still holding her face. I leaned in and kissed her lips. - Souen1128mthCommented
Hope you feel better soon.
I've been quite down about my health, having contracted both the cold and covid in a short span of time, and I haven't fully recovered from my run in with the world halting virus. It's been quite the trial to manage the motivation to write, which is quite the shame as it is one of the few things that makes me happy. Despite the downer mood from constantly feeling like I have a child sitting on my chest, the call of finishing my various works managed to rouse me for the grind. This story is done, outside of an epilogue chapter. I considered bringing in lots of out of setting drama for Donnchadh to contend with, but ultimate felt that it was better for me this way. Not all of my stories need to go multiversal off of the rails. - Souen1129mthCommented
That's pretty rude.
Beatrice hesitated, folded her arms, and then looked Dante up and down. "Is it okay if I call you a Neanderthal? Because that's totally what you are." - Souen1129mthCommented
I must have missed him getting the money to do this. He's 2k in debt last I knew.
"Mhm, speaking of an adult. I want to accomplish something and acquire some advanced life skills. To that end, I rented a one-bedroom studio apartment in the mini-estate on the west side of the city." - Souen1129mthCommented
RIP, nice story, go next.
He only had time to furrow his brows and wonder what the hell was wrong before his phone screen virtually exploded in a purple-black light and swallowed him whole. - Souen1129mthCommented
utter nonsense! There's a million and one games out there that went through the roof
Now would be a good time to talk about the app Dante was making. As Dante's lecturer had once joked, App Developers made apps in response to a need, not a want. It was the only way for an app to break through and become a legendary Super App! - Souen1129mthCommented
Have you tried a little thing called discipline? I hear it works wonders.
Intelligent but unmotivated. - Souen1129mthCommented
Very fitting. He doesn't owe these people he's just trying to make a good impression. Well done.
It could be better, way better but there was no real need to use more time and resources. It was a simple gift. - Souen11210mthPosted
It's a decently well written for an afternoon where you have nothing else to do. The problem as so often happens with Authors who do self inserts, is the fact that our main character by the time his first Gacha came around. Could do whatever he wanted. He's a mechanic. He's a musician. He's a cook. He's a programmer. He's a designer. He's everything and anything and he apparently has time to do it all. His drawback for being professionally good at all these things? Some minor misfortune in the form of a rake to his face. The Gacha system also get's completely forgotten going forward. By chapter 30, we haven't even gotten a second mention of it in the story. Worst of all however is the authors pedophilic obsession with having nearly every girl and even some older women fall for him instantly. He's 14 and the author can not help himself from writing all these adults desiring and seductively looking at this young child only barely able to resist the temptation to take him. Worst of all the author believes this to be a 'realistic' take on a slice of life setting. Again, a decent read if you can ignore all the innuendo towards the child and the mc being an infallible monolith at anything he does. I can't so I wish you well.
- Souen11210mthCommented
Honestly... just why?
"It's okay. I came early didn't I?" I asked with a grin. "And this is?" I turned to the handsome female lawyer and asked. With a stature like a model, the pixie-cut female lawyer introduced herself. "Harvey. Harvey Spectre." - Souen11210mthCommented
Headscout Truck-kun strikes again baby
The last thing I remember was that a speeding truck with its lights on crashed into my bike. I had an accident on my way home, and after a period of struggle to keep my consciousness intact, my world darkened. - Souen11210mthCommented
so I guess i judged the mc a bit early...
Oh, at high levels it will give extra dexterity. Forget it, not worth the effort for 2 [DEX]. - Souen11210mthCommented
so far this is very promising. He isn't being stupid and his choices make sense
Examining it shows it does way more damage than his bat did, so after a bit of haggling and the last of his coin, he's ready to face the day with a weapon upgrade. - Souen11210mthCommented
What a bro!
"Here. Wooden Bat, it's a copper at the weapon shop, but they won't buy them back. I just like using them for the thud." The man laughs after handing over the bat and walks away. - Souen11210mthReplied to Monarch_Lord
yes, because pedophilia is just so funny it should be used in fantasy books and made fun of!... Not. Like I said I honestly don't understand how people defend this. I've reported the story, clearly it's still up so obviously the admins think this is a laughing matter. So I wish you well, everyone who reads this as a matter of fact. I just think making light of this particular topic is a slippery slope. It's pointless to argue against people whose argument boils down to: 'But it's just a story!' If we can't argree that pedophilia should be stomped out and exterminated wherever it is found then I just don't want to have anything to do with you. It's that simple. And that's all I'll say on the matter any more.
Why does my heart feels ecstatic? - Souen11210mthReplied to Monarch_Lord
The fact that we as a society and you personally are more concerned about the fact that I apparently 'attacked' the author, than someone who is clearly writing about pedophilia. Honestly says more about you than me. But go on everyone defend this. If that makes you feel better about your inclinations I can take it. I just genuinely hope you can get help before you act on them outside of the internet.
Why does my heart feels ecstatic?