and a bit funny how rina father worrying anout her relation with aron when he let rina married rottem

i got hook by this, it just the world building from chap 200 to 300 a bit to long and wtf with rina, i thought sarah is aron girlfreind because how they'e interact in beginning, and the way they end up together just a bit rush

i already read until early chapter 300, and i want to say about kate and brick story seems abit forcefull, out of nowhere kate become crazy girl and the reason to kill is abit, mmm you know.., and brick, its not the way he became monster but the story seems like, it getting drag and unnecessary especially lucian

i read until chapter 202, yet he still 8years old, slapping everyone everytime he visit and inspect his business, there is no significant story development for ch.200, as bad as it is, its still help me spend my time, well goodluck

quite good

man this is funny, i read 433, this novel turn to shit, when i read your review, and read 540, lol i dont know what to say, i dont mind harem or not in novel, but its just author describe mc personality different everychapter

i dont know how to describe this novel, i read 433chapter of this novel, yet i cant like the mc one bit, i dont know what author want to potrait about mc personality, he kill wantonly,killing entire village because one person poison him, saying green lotus girl rude when she asking him when he do the same to her, he saying he wont kill if no one provoke him, but kill people to learn their cultivation tecniq for ai,and li rong really pitifull when her entire family gone and he just said the weak get eaten by th strong, lol fuck

hei, what happend with lin tian? i still waiting for his story,did u drop it?

i read until the last chapter, there some confusing plot like lin tian(mc) have the same face with lin tian (ji xian ex lover), but in the later chapter lintan(mc) had similiar face with mo xie, does that mean the three of them have the same face or author just forget about it and make mistake, and why would the author make another novel with basically the same titile with this novel but with different mc, did u just drop this?i think its stil have potential, i quite enjoy this

i know, but it just doesnt sit well for me, just like i said i dont care if its have harem or not,i just hope it will be great at the later stage, i cant imagine a man help a woman just because she is his woman best friend,it feels to forcefull, but so far i really enjoy this novel

you know, you decided to change the script, ariel should become his second women, but later you change it, making her to be only azura best friend, it doesnt sit well for me, if it from the start you write it like that, its fine, but changing it later, a big no for me, it doesnt matter if you make mistake, mistake will make you regret your decision, but at the same time its also a good thing for you, regret will make you want to be better, human learn from mistake, i really enjoy this novel, i dont care if there harem or not, i really want to give 5 star, in my review,but your decision disappoint me, i can only give you 3 star, and hope if you have new work, you will never done something like this again, its better to learn from mistake

i want to give this novel 5 star, but author really make me disappointed, why? simple, you know, the author decided to change the script in chapter 174, ariel should become his second women, but later he change it, making her to be only azura best friend, it doesnt sit well for me, if it from the start author write it like that, its fine, but changing it later, a big no for me, i dont care it have harem or not, doesnt matter for me, its normal for author make mistake, it will be good for author development in career and skill, but changing it like that, where would you learn from your mistake, making mistake will make you regret your decision,but, i belive it will make you try better

you know, the author decided to change the script, ariel should become his second women, but later he change it, making her to be only azura best friend, it doesnt sit well for me, if it from the start author write it like that, its fine, but changing it later, a big no for me

agree, lol, he visit someone place and just eat altar own by willow tree, doesnt he learn from previous thing when he ate altar, his family get killed

what happened to the pleasure lord, as much as i like the story , i still want to read the orevious work