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i want to give this novel 5 star, but author really make me disappointed, why? simple, you know, the author decided to change the script in chapter 174, ariel should become his second women, but later he change it, making her to be only azura best friend, it doesnt sit well for me, if it from the start author write it like that, its fine, but changing it later, a big no for me, i dont care it have harem or not, doesnt matter for me, its normal for author make mistake, it will be good for author development in career and skill, but changing it like that, where would you learn from your mistake, making mistake will make you regret your decision,but, i belive it will make you try better
Martial Arts System
Alekzi
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The author made a single change to completely improve the novel. Ichiro and Azura's romance is amazing and the protagonist has already claimed to be monogamous, the author almost makes this mistake of needlessly creating a harem and introducing a random girl using fate as a background. One of the coolest things about Ichiro is him facing his emotional issues of both of his lives and falling in love with Azura, he is also always fighting fate including what would affect his relationship with Azura. The harem, besides being completely unnecessary, also makes no sense because the protagonist has already found the woman he loves and wants her to be his and Azura wants him to be hers. Author Alekzi decided to stick with a well-developed and consistent romance instead of adding random girls like other harem authors do to compensate for his inability to develop a good romance between a couple.