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no it's one body. but it was a split soul
the world you set up is unique in its own way. I do think that you should run it through an editor app or a editor due to run on sentences and improve on inner thought and outer thought writing so it is easier to follow for a reader. and I suggest smaller paragraphs for those who read on mobile phones it makes it hard to read
ok first starting off I have to state that this is out of my usual cup of tea. it has a really good use of first person and it is unique in the use of verbal communication it allows each character to have a life of its own and not the same repeated word. I have to say it's an amazing book keep it up.