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JustScott1yrCommentedSuggestion: Another *tug* on his clothes. Thank you for the chapter.
Another thug on his clothes, and Michael woke up from his stupor. He gritted his teeth before briefly closing his eyes. He then returned to his group and continued fighting the non-ending Windigos.- JustScott1yrCommented
Suggestion: That *is exactly what* Evie had in mind.
That's what exactly Evie had in mind. It was bitter killing the Windigo fast than wasting mana and time on [Heal] that only restored minuscule some of HP. - JustScott1yrCommented
Mutton is meat from sheep. Chevon would be meat from goats.
As a modern person who had reincarnated, he had indeed never eaten such raw meat. Moreover, it was mutton, which had an odd taste. - JustScott1yrCommented
Suggestion: *raise* both health and mana.
Healers can heal people, and so can Alchemists, they can make potions that can heal both health and mana. - JustScott1yrCommented
Can you *repeat* what you just said to me
This paragraph has been deleted. - JustScott1yrCommentedCh 122 There’s Nothing Cuter than my Guns
- JustScott1yrCommentedCh 110 The Smiling Caravan’s Quest
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Suggestion: you are not *from* around here?
"Interesting name. I am guessing that you are not around here? Afraid of showing your face are you? Dont worry, many are. As long as you do not piss of the wrong people, you will be fine. You will go through a few fights before you are assigned a rank. What is your cultivation?" he asked. - JustScott1yrCommented
What color is her hair? Black or auburn? Those are quite different colors. Maybe dark auburn or two toned?
She could only be described as a goddess. She had long black auburn hair, bright green eyes, tan skin, and a perfect face. - JustScott1yrCommented
Stone cold face (maybe?)
Scar smirked to himself. Though the idea of her beautiful stone cod face cracked as she acted out was also tempting to see. - JustScott1yrCommented
Writing suggestion: hid *her* breasts.
Lucia burst red and hid his breasts from everyone. "Mind your own business!" - JustScott1yrCommented
Grammar suggestion: Otaku *are* people . . .
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Suggestion: water your thrust -> water your thirst.
"We're diverging from the main topic more, but it wouldn't hurt to water your thrust as most of you looked interested in this topic," Sophia said. "A Designer is a Class actually, like a Mage, Swordsman or Healer. But the Designer leans more towards the development than actual combat. As you know, all matter, living or dead, is made of Omega codes or Axi codes in the old tongues. A Designer is someone who can alter or distort the code according to their wills. They are like alchemists but more on a deeper level. Do you get the idea what they do now?" - JustScott1yrCommented
wind orc -> wind roc
"The divine great roc is an Overlord class pet while the green sparrow is only an Otherworldly class, spanning three classes," Ming Zhu shrugged, "So you can imagine the difficulty. It doesn't have many weaknesses at all. Among its six dimensions, the one with the highest growth is its strength, which can reach S-grade. Even the level two evolved form, the wind orc, is a Supreme first-class pet. Just the evolution from the green sparrow to the wind orc requires the green sparrow to learn an advanced sky-type skill and make it reach the proficient realm... Though, the divine great roc is not only a sky-type pet. Its secondary attribute is the darkness-type, which is what we often call dark-type pets. It's very rare. Dark-type pets have a very strong resistance against the power of strangeness of strange gods. Although the dark-type attribute is only secondary for the roc that will only have a little bit of dark energy in its body, it's enough to greatly increase the divine great roc's abilities. Of course, among bird-type pets, the green sparrow isn't the only one that can evolve into a divine great roc. However, it's most difficult for the green sparrow because its starting point is too low." - JustScott1yrCommented
Suggestion: deceived -> definitive
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skin -> carapace?
The sharp blade tore through the skin of the beetle. While the beetle's skin was thick and tough, it was still not tough enough to block Qin Feng's long blade. Qin Feng's sword landed on the beetle's head and cut it all the way to the bottom! - JustScott1yrCommented
branch *off* the tree.
Qin Feng extended his hand and broke a branch of the tree that he just collided with, using it as a spear. - JustScott1yrCommented
meat petty -> meat patty
Even though he did suffer from injuries and was feeling pain all over his body, but this pain was nothing compared to when he was turned into meat petty after being thrown down from the top of a mountain.