why do they keep calling yu xiaogang "brock" this isnt pokemon

the explosion worm martial soul is useless i think im dropping this one

the name of his fire magic changed again.....

more likely lamp oil

it wouldn't have been kakashi he'd entrust matters to he wouldn't even have been born yet...

lord of wrong names

there were only ever a few notable uchias to begin with

bah based on the characters he chose this is gonna suck

too much skipping around and too much cutsie childlike behavior it makes it agonizing to read especially the dragon

why is it all they eat in this au is mashed potatoes

using his full name constantly just shows the author doesn't know what he's doing makes ever sentence sound weird

i didnt know uncle Vernon was a Weasley

it was pretty good until recent chapters where the mc wants to make pokemon.....something about that makes this whole thing seem mid

the fusion power in the original was better

got malfoys name wrong...... Macmillan

mc name is so stupid that alone is making me wanna drop it

danzo is the culprit

is it just me or is this sounding suspiciously like Eminence in Shadow next youll tell me his ultimate move is "I Am Atomic"

10year ring is stupid

keep saying looks like this no images or place to find em