Ultra instinct can be done. Ultra instinct is just the body moving without going through the brain first for signals, meaning that with life return you can replicate that as your conciousness replaces brain signals.

I’d love a pure swordsman one piece fan fic but the sword doesnt seem to fit here. You gave him two gifts that put him on the road of Hand to hand combat especially the zoan fruit.

Dont you think thats a little too strong? Like you need to realise 2 admirals is equate to a yonko. Now you are telling me mc = 3 yonko, its 9 chapters in and the mc is already the strongest.

Is this storm fruit for display or smth? He is logia, he doesnt need to waste strength on armament haki.

thanks for chapter

Personally i hate system fanfictions, yours however while has kinda made it difficult to progress the story was not that bad. If you are redoing the novel then removing the system will help you, world nobles have the best respurces available, there is no need for a system. Remove the system and create a txt file that lists the progress of the MC if you are having trouble tracking progress or forget what you wrote. Remove the system and make the MC train to get all his strength, it makes it more realistic that way and helps not make the story full of plot holes. For example the proficiency adding to skills basically was the reason the MC became too OP. When you redo it focus more on swordsmanship its much better than devil fruit, devil fruit is not owned by the user even once awakened. One of the gorosei has a sword, suspected of being the supreme cursed sword. Just have him train him in swordsmanship.

Id rather not have a devil fruit protaganist. The power system of OP is mainly Haki and physical strength. Swordsmanship is also a good method for attack. Devil fruit creates multiple weaknesses; the sea, sea stone, dark fruit and a counter fruit like rubber vs thunder fruit. Not to mention devil fruit only has an awakening stage, After awakening there is nothing. Strong enough haki can overpower devil fruit ablilites meaning that there seems to be a conflict with the teo wnergy systems in the body. However, if you must just include devil fruit use a God from some mythology as a mythical zoan.

Female world nobles use the word palace instead of saint. Saint is for men.

There are many problems with this novel, for one I dont even know what the main character looks like. Not even his height. The first chapter ruined the novel with having him become Namis slave(Spoiler). For some reason the mc is extremely weak, he was trained by Garp for 2 months and trained with his buffs from chapter 1 in his 4 years of training he was still a piece of shit in terms of strength. Then there is the character of the MC, the mc is a child a real child because all he has is memorys of someones life, but there is no emotions or attachments to the memorys. This equating them into pure information in the form of memories, the personality of the MC is quite contradictory and while knows the island people dont owe him anything doesnt seem to realise he doenst owe them anything. MC seems to also not realise he himself is a child when comparing his suffering to Namis. MC has had no friends, been bullied and the only friend he made was killed but low key thinks Nami is suffering more then him. People who lack something especially children will have an obession with it once they have it.

Good book, hope there is going to be a larger amount of chapters for this book. MC is a world noble but isn’t one of those novels where the MC is playing the “good guy”. Interactions are not cringe R-18 scenes are actually pretty good. If i had to say what I would change is being systemless, personally I feel that systems ruin fanfictions but this one is quite mild hope it stays more comeplementory.

This is the true use of Kami-E.

Starts of decent, then the MC eats a devil fruit when he doesn't need one. Not to mention the devil fruit isn't that good even though the author has tried to make it look good, like imo either don't have a devil fruit or go for mythical zoan. After that it is okay, There are big aspects of chinese culture when it isn't a chinese novel and also doesn't make any sense. The relationships between people is alright until it comes to romance where it is completely forced. I had to stop once I saw this, point because it was just hard to watch.