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There are many problems with this novel, for one I dont even know what the main character looks like. Not even his height. The first chapter ruined the novel with having him become Namis slave(Spoiler). For some reason the mc is extremely weak, he was trained by Garp for 2 months and trained with his buffs from chapter 1 in his 4 years of training he was still a piece of shit in terms of strength. Then there is the character of the MC, the mc is a child a real child because all he has is memorys of someones life, but there is no emotions or attachments to the memorys. This equating them into pure information in the form of memories, the personality of the MC is quite contradictory and while knows the island people dont owe him anything doesnt seem to realise he doenst owe them anything. MC seems to also not realise he himself is a child when comparing his suffering to Namis. MC has had no friends, been bullied and the only friend he made was killed but low key thinks Nami is suffering more then him. People who lack something especially children will have an obession with it once they have it.

Amarillo's Pirate Adventure (One Piece SI)

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