Baby steps, is that a reference to the pacing?

Will do

Since you changed the title like the other guy said should I remove my review? Considering my review doesn’t accurately portray your story anymore.

Started off good but the last 80 or so chapters have been marvel fanboying, there’s also a lot of one piece fanboying, which wouldn’t matter if other series got even half as much written about them

Incredibly bland, the dialogue portrays a very simplistic train of thought, description is lacking, and reactions are over exaggerated, its a slosh to read through. Like wading through knee high water, not enough to ruin your day if you are careful, but definitely a pain to make your way through. Overall I give it a 2, because i was too lazy this time to give each category of the review its own rating.

Swear i Read this story before

Need…more…..sust..enance

To be fair there is some pretty overbearing op docs out there like the red king I think it’s called?

Did you or did you not write the story? He absorbed those ants, you didnt say in t4eh story it only affected his arm strength you labeled it STR in general, and strength affects speed, if his strength increase was increased through exercise in the story what you said would make sense, but don't use dumb examples to explain things you didn't state worked that way in the story

Are you suffering brain damage?

And? His age has nothing to do with his potential

in a world where has to fight literal gods, titans, and possibly primordials.

What sewer said. Your grammar right now is on par with a sleep deprived 12 year old primary English speaker.

What?

are you changing the way the omnitrix works as far as I know bens never worked off is physical strength or stuff affecting it

I mean whats this even supposed to mean? If you are gonna be racist atleast articulate your points better

Makes sense, happens to me way too often

but not every country respects copyright laws hence why i mentioned he better not be living in the united states/japan as they actually take it seriously out of the countries I know that have copyright law. Same with korea i think.

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Infiltrator, Scrappy, Costar? No idea