Review Detail of FrightKnight88 in Completing Missions in the Multiverse
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I mean, dont label the story rising of the shield hero when you literally time skip into his strength then give him a travel system and he leaves that world in the first chapter, we dont even have a single dedicated chapter to his time in the shield hero world, theres tons that could be done by him to improve that world, this is lazy writing on the level of wish fulfilment where out 8 chapters only the first quarter of the first chapter even vaguely is about that world
Completing Missions in the Multiverse
Niranjan_Gurav
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Since you changed the title like the other guy said should I remove my review? Considering my review doesn’t accurately portray your story anymore.
Niranjan_Gurav:Thank you for your review and I am going to improve my writing skills. I have just started writing fanfiction and English is not my first language, I will try to improve. Thanks Fright Knight 88. The story I am writing is mainly focused on the main plot, The story in the shield hero world will be clarified in the future. The reason for this is that I wanted my character to be Kinda of OP.
Thank you for your review and I am going to improve my writing skills. I have just started writing fanfiction and English is not my first language, I will try to improve. Thanks Fright Knight 88. The story I am writing is mainly focused on the main plot, The story in the shield hero world will be clarified in the future. The reason for this is that I wanted my character to be Kinda of OP.
It will be kind of you to remove this review since it affects my views. Thank you for providing a helpful advice.
FrightKnight88:Since you changed the title like the other guy said should I remove my review? Considering my review doesn’t accurately portray your story anymore.
Niranjan_Gurav:It will be kind of you to remove this review since it affects my views. Thank you for providing a helpful advice.