HiroHeartlands
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HiroHeartlands12dCommentedWas your modern family fic out when you wrote this line?
"That's my FIANCE!" Gwen shouted toward the stage. Ryan looked toward her and winked. 'Thank you Ed.' He thought secretly. Kai let out a chuckle, and danced together with Natasha. Then, he pulled the reluctant Doreen away from the cake and danced together with her too.- HiroHeartlands17dCommented
Wait, Rick agreed with Kai that 'not like you can do anything about it'??? That doesn't sound like Rick.
"Let's go, Morty!" Rick pulled his grandson's shirt and dragged him into the portal. - HiroHeartlands21dCommented
There is a pretty nice chess theme here that I just realized. Kai and Ryan are Knights, of course. The elf is the bishop. I think V was a pawn, due to his 'promotion' ability of changing controllers and gaining new traits. I wonder if in the future chapters MC will complete the set.
He found it quite easily too. "Kai Vera. The Kingsman. Is he a royal guard? " he tried to pry the information from Fury but to no avail. - HiroHeartlands24dCommented
You know it would've been nice if he got the girls to make artwork for him to sell, making them think he is somehow 'eating' their paintings and statues thus furthering his mysterious vibe while also giving them some fun hobbies beyond training.
That seems to snub her enthusiasm, as she already planned a lot of tributes for him the moment the idea came to her. - HiroHeartlands29dCommented
Then make a bunch of blue prints and sell them?
When he thought clearly, it's because the blueprint section provided the buyer with item creation abilities, rendering the item for sale obsolete. Ryan concluded it at the thought. It's not like there's anyone to confirm it for him, but it made the most sense. - HiroHeartlands1mthReplied to Kioha
May god bless you, you made me laugh!
[Image] - HiroHeartlands1mthPosted
Besides the rushed ending there was no real problems. A solidly enjoyable story. The Good -Early chapters were rather fun. -The empire building stories are always great. The Bad -The late chapters were rushed. -There is never additional information about a thing, like you mentioned publishing so many award winning IPs and only mentioned Apollo getting awards for them in the final chapters... -There is a ton of wasted potential. No movie producing chapters, no chapters where MC interacts with anyone outside of his circle of minions(unless they die in that chapter or have little to no dialogue), and no magic training or power gaining chapters where Apollo trains or finds ways to make tools or gain power from worship or anything like that. There were times when the exposition got to ChaptGPT-ish and I admittedly usually just skipped reading those, but all in all I enjoyed this greatly.
- HiroHeartlands1mthCommented
Say that after watching Detroit Metal City! The true king of comedy!
Love is War was the best romantic comedy anime. Period. While I wanted to make Love is War earlier, there were certain cultural references that I needed to exist. After waiting over 10 years, the high school environment had sufficiently changed for the show to be viable. - HiroHeartlands1mthCommented
GTA San Andreas takes place in 1992... You could make Vice City and Vice City Stories a prequel?
1992 looked like a good year. Apollo Enterprises was set to start online ordering and deliveries through an application called 'Amazon.' The next books of Harry Potter and A Song of Ice and Fire were coming out. And we were going to release Grand Theft Auto in the summer, with Toy Story being released in the winter. - HiroHeartlands1mthCommented
Is this a flag? It isn't right? That wouldn't really fit the tone of this story.
As Edward and Haley entered the room, they saw Vanessa sitting on the bed with a blank look on her face. She was wearing a blue blouse and her legs were covered by the white blanket. Haley helped her tie her hair into a side ponytail, which made Edward have a thought comparing her to the anime mom's that would die so that the main character could have character development in the beginning of the storyline. - HiroHeartlands1mthReplied to ZhourongHephaestus
It was clear that Ed and Taylor weren't going to work out though! And not to mention there is Hailey... Clearly the superior choice from the start.
"I guess. I need a fresh start." Edward muttered as he looked into the mirror. He held a few strands of his long hair, "And maybe a haircut too." - HiroHeartlands1mthReplied to I_like_dragons72
Wow, it had been years since I laughed at a meme! Thanks for the share my dude!
"Who is that? Another girl that you want to–" Taylor said and grabbed the phone the second she heard it chimed. She froze for a bit and then turned to look at me. Her eyes almost became bloodshot and she gritted her teeth as she said, "You're still texting Abby? Your ex-girlfriend…Abby?" - HiroHeartlands2mthCommented
D'awww I wanted to see more of this...
Next chapter will be a time skip. We are going back to the normal story. - HiroHeartlands2mthReplied to Nero_2
Woah, now that would be a great line to say! Good thinking.
"We're not humans." I said. "We're eternals." - HiroHeartlands2mthReplied to nunya_business_3493
I think it can be a good movie. Imagine it having multiple povs, and each group having a different tones. Police comedy genre for Brooklyn 99. Romance, intrigue, and action comedy for the mercenary group. Edward would be mysterious and not show up until all the other characters have been introduced. And the final over the top action scene for Edward's prison break. Maybe put a little artistic mystery by making a grey hoodie(great merchandising opportunity) shift between characters. Like making the hoodie seem like an important plot point on Kanye's tire slashing, before revealing it as Ed's superhero suit or something comedic and unexpected.
Jake smiled, "Why are you guys feeling so dumps in the dumps? We're practically heroes! I mean, we are heroes every day, but it's not a usual thing to get people asking if we want to sell our movie rights! And to answer that question, not if–" - HiroHeartlands2mthCommented
Speaking of movie rights... Couldn't Edward make a movie about this event?
Jake smiled, "Why are you guys feeling so dumps in the dumps? We're practically heroes! I mean, we are heroes every day, but it's not a usual thing to get people asking if we want to sell our movie rights! And to answer that question, not if–" - HiroHeartlands2mthCommented
Her nudes got leaked? Why was she uncomfortable?
I took out my phone and scrolled for a picture. However, Vanessa was looking extremely uncomfortable when I did so. I was confused, but it didn't stop me from showing my picture from early in the year. - HiroHeartlands2mthCommented
Sure... Offering MONEY to a literally omnipotent being... Makes total sense.
"Please tell me. I'll do anything, pay any price. Money is no obje-" - HiroHeartlands2mthCommented
Really? Directly copy pasting what chatgpt gave you? What will i read next? "... grand tapestry of xxx..."???
The footage painted a different picture from what the detectives had initially presumed, introducing a new lead to investigate. The unexpected turn of events shifted their focus, prompting them to delve deeper into the identity and motives of this mysterious individual captured on screen. - HiroHeartlands3mthCommented
Because Loki didn't touch the staff to Tony but to the Arc Reactor, whose energy signature is similar to Space Stone. More than that I would think a mind control focused energy would be rather fragile, and trying to direct it through another energy line would only end in failure.
I switched off my forcefield, just to lure him in, see how my mind control earpiece fares against his staff. If Tony's arc reactor can stop it's power, why can't my bionics?