LegendaryKin
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1 star Although I liked this novel in the beginning, as I progressed upto chapter 81 I’ve decided that reading this was a waste of time and that the so called “MC” is just a simp. His so called revenge against Hailey is garbage and the amount of times he let her off because of his so called feelings for her is outrageously stupid.
So I just started reading this novel and wow, it went from “yeah this is gold.” to “wait don’t I know these events from somewhere?”. Such a disappointment. Half way through the novel you will start to notice that it is becoming more like the ultimate scheming system and although some bits are changed, they didn’t even before to put it much effort.
Try using ‘has’ instead of ‘have’, like For example, instead of ‘he have a lot of points on the system.’ It’s ‘he has a lot points on the system.’ Hope this helps out and thanks for the chapter
Although the quality has dropped a bit in terms of grammar and choice of words from chapter 35-36, they are still very good in terms of events that has lead it to be where we are now. I very much do enjoy this novel and I hope you improve as the chapters go on. Thanks for the chapter.
So Neil, oh boy where do I start… Even though he has upgraded every organ in his body, he is still dumb let’s be real. He also doesn’t know how valunable food is in the apocalypse and gives it away like candy in exchange for the local currency which isn’t worth it if he did research on their camp.