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My opinion? The story had good potential, but it started to fall apart the moment other characters were introduced, becoming... A complete disappointment, why? Their depth is non-existent, their personality is not well developed, and above all... I feel as if I was seeing an ignoble person with a superior complex when seeing the protagonist and his attitudes, in addition, he has a naivety that irritates me, teaching and basically giving power to other characters, any of which can betray you when considering that Gods have mental manipulation in their hands... Sigh, anyway, the last part is just my personal opinion and not that of a reader like the rest... ..
Honestly, there are points in this story that are good, but the negative points take away any possible shine. Firstly, the protagonist has no personality, where is the trait of stubbornness or pride that made him refuse to be entertainment for a God when he became a servant? Another thing is its childishness and stupidity, added to the lack of depth, makes this story bad.
The story started very well, at least until a certain point it was great! But after he started the simulations in Demon Slayer, things gradually got worse, the protagonist showed very retarded characteristics and in the most recent chapters this became even more concrete, he doesn't have the slightest bit of deep personality. He's basically a Beta who thinks he's chad...
To be honest, if the author doesn't kill Acnologia with a blow from Balmung, I'll stop reading — it's simply impossible for him to survive an attack from such a sword, Nasuverse is infinitely superior to Fairy Tail in terms of concepts. And don't give an explanation like, Acnologia isn't a real dragon or he's immune to magic, anyone who knows about the Type-moon Universe knows that this isn't impressive at all.
I've read some bad Agianst The Gods stories, but this one is by far the worst I've ever seen, why? Simple, the protagonist is ordinary, has no knowledge of the world he is in, doesn't have a captivating personality and seems like an ignoble person without salvation. The characters are also not faithful to the novel, it looks more like Ocs than anything, in short, don't waste your time...
Fafnir could basically destroy the world, but cannot due to containing Fate's strength, Balmung can go head to head with an attack from Karna's Vasavi Shakti that can erase universes, so if it doesn't kill Acnologia with one Hit, consider a very big nerf ....
I really liked the different vision from other DxD stories, with the protagonist training and living among the Yokai faction, a shame that everything was poorly applied and too superficial to arrest anyone, but what ruined it for me was the fact that he taught his skills to everyone as if he were handing out sweets. It's pure naivety on the part of the protagonist, I don't particularly like this type of story. But this is just my particular and sincere taste for this review, in general the story could be good for you, my dear companions.
Firstly, I didn't attack, I gave my honest opinion about a “bad” story, to prevent people from wasting their precious time on such a thing. And you're right about it being a fanfiction, but this also reflects on the author's writing ability, making it clear that it is mediocre to the point that even a twelve year old child could do better. And finally, I don't care what you think, do or think... Have a great week, mediocre writer.