Honestly, there are points in this story that are good, but the negative points take away any possible shine. Firstly, the protagonist has no personality, where is the trait of stubbornness or pride that made him refuse to be entertainment for a God when he became a servant? Another thing is its childishness and stupidity, added to the lack of depth, makes this story bad.
alexis_venas
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LIKEThat took years in canon...does that mean we have to read of him being a slave for years...yeah, no, that's not for me.
gfg_gsgs:friend, in the story it says that he only acted as his servant to continue the plot until Louise made a portal back to the modern world.