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Novelstar_PG1yrPostedThe author knows how to use "show not tell" technique and writing, especially in narrating the characters emotion. Not just simply telling the readers that she/he fid and that. The prologue part is well-written, from there, we could really say that the remaining parts of the story would also reflect to it. It is clear and precise. Also, the synopsis is catchy. And I am wondering what 'gift' the protagonist has.
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I love the description π
Blaze wanted to throw up upon seeing the lifeless bodies of dragon-slayers littering the paths she took as she ran with Kingsley on her back. No matter how hard she tried, she couldn't get rid of the gruesome sight of her dead allies out of her head. The dizziness caused by the sickening scent of blood all around her was only made worse due to her enhanced sense of smell compared to others. - Novelstar_PG1yrCommentedCh 7 Earth Wyrm
- Novelstar_PG1yrCommented
clean and concise
She took a glance at the others beside her as they began lighting up torches to illuminate the paths before them. The groups split up and wasted no time to locate the Dragon in its supposed nest, scouring in a different direction. - Novelstar_PG1yrCommented
simple yet better to understand
The pressure in the atmosphere surrounding the four Dragon-slayers was real as the crowd was left unnerved. - Novelstar_PG1yrCommented
I love the description.
Winter was currently dressed in a fresh set of the Death Reaper uniform, white gloves on his hands. Gold buttons lined the black, double-breasted military coat, matching the color of the novelty epaulets on each shoulder, a gold aiguillette hanging on the right. - Novelstar_PG1yrCommented
Okay, so this part is surprising impressive.
Colleen's shoulders stooped helplessly, trembling ever-so-slightly. - Novelstar_PG1yrCommented
ok nice word choice
"Wha... ish... it?" Blazed slurred. With her cheeks painted a bright shade of pink from excessive alcohol, she hiccupped as she ogled at her best friend. - Novelstar_PG1yrCommented
How to pronounce Jarak's name? Harak? Charak? Jaerak?
"So you're here," Jarak Lockster greeted Winter with his languorous uncanny voice. Jarak Lockster was one of the top mercenaries in the Death Reaper Organization, having been a dragon-slayer who had abandoned his faction to join the secretive syndicate. With the former's usual frosty demeanor, it seemed he wasn't at all pleased to see Winter. - Novelstar_PG1yrCommented
Nice
The guy swallowed a plentiful of dry saliva as Blaze's raging eyes landed on him. The former attempted to move his stiffened body, pointing at a lifeless body not far away from where they were standing. - Novelstar_PG1yrCommented
Impressive
A sudden burst of fury led Blaze to impulsively leap over the edge of the cliff and fall from a monstrous height. It hurt all over, but the burning rage that enveloped her whole entity allowed her to pay no heed to pain, focusing only to take the fastest possible way home. - Novelstar_PG1yrPosted
The author narrates the story in an indirect way that it makes you think of the possibilities that is not directly stated in the narration. Also, the theme of the story is impressive and relatable at some points, especially the "family" part. Although there are still parts that need to be improve, including the technicalities, I highly recommend for you to read this story. -NS PG
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Hm... impressive
Survive against its wave - Novelstar_PG2yrPosted
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- Novelstar_PG2yrPosted
This is Novelstar_PG speaking, a web editor from Novelstar. I have done reading the first few chapters of your book, and I've noticed that this has a great potential to get published in our platform. I want to offer a non-exclusive contract to it. Kindly send me and email with a screenshot of this offer. Tell me if you're interested. Thank you and have a good day ahead!
- Novelstar_PG2yrPosted
This is Novelstar_PG speaking, a web editor from Novelstar. I have done reading the first few chapters of your book, and I've noticed that this has a great potential to get published in our platform. I want to offer a non-exclusive contract to it. Kindly send me and email with a screenshot of this offer. Tell me if you're interested. Thank you and have a good day ahead!
- Novelstar_PG2yrPosted
Novelstar_PG: Hello, Author. This is Novelstar_PG speaking, a web editor from Novelstar. I have done reading the first few chapters of your book, and I've noticed that this has a great potential to get published in our platform. I want to offer a non-exclusive contract to it. Kindly send me and email with a screenshot of this offer. Tell me if you're interested. Thank you and have a good day ahead!
- Novelstar_PG2yrPosted
Novelstar_PG: Hello, Author. This is Novelstar_PG speaking, a web editor from Novelstar. I have done reading the first few chapters of your book, and I've noticed that this has a great potential to get published in our platform. I want to offer a non-exclusive contract to it. Kindly send me and email with a screenshot of this offer. Tell me if you're interested. Thank you and have a good day ahead!
- Novelstar_PG2yrPosted
Hello, Author. This is Novelstar_PG speaking, a web editor from Novelstar. I have done reading the first few chapters of your book, and I've noticed that this has a great potential to get published in our platform. I want to offer a non-exclusive contract to it. Kindly send me and email with a screenshot of this offer. Tell me if you're interested. Thank you and have a good day ahead!
