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Mrinal_24

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  • Mrinal_24
    Mrinal_241yr
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    Don't bother to read this Novel, it started very good. I even enjoyed it, but I don't know what happen to the Author he finished the novel in very bad way and in hurry. The ending was not satisfying. it I'll end around 500+ chapter. So don't hurt ur brain and heart by reading this novel. I hope some other author pick this novel and complete it in proper way.

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    Unable to Cultivate, I Can Only Raise Soul Pets
    Games · Summer Harp
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  • Mrinal_24
    Mrinal_241yr
    Replied to Typhlix

    first of all I still like the dumb MC...common he is in a new planet with advance tech and gadgets, so he I'll be zoning out a little. he don't have enough info about the situation he was in. But Author please i like this novel of urs after reading many downgraded novels. but don't make it in Harem. even if you creating Harem, don't add women left and right. in my view with our Dumb MC two is enough that he can handle. But I'll still suggest no HAREM.

    altalt
    Multi-Gene
    Sci-fi · Typhlix
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  • Mrinal_24
    Mrinal_241yr
    Posted

    it's amazing...you won't even realised which chapter you are reading coz u I'll be so absorbed in the novel....I have only one issue, PLEASE DON'T MAKE IT INTO HAREM. Love should be Monogamous

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    Re: Evolution Online
    Fantasy · Yolohy
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  • Mrinal_24
    Mrinal_242yr
    Posted

    Am in chp 150+, the story is still ok ok but you are bringing girl in his bed too fast Author. He have been living for billion of years but he still give away his affection too easily.

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    The Immortal's Wine Store
    Eastern · Malignant
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  • Mrinal_24
    Mrinal_242yr
    Commented

    The Virtual Berserker Ape can have emotion really....it just flinch. HOWWWWWWW

    Ch 11 Chapter 11: The exam
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    Cultivation Pet Shop
    Eastern · DXHaseoXD
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  • Mrinal_24
    Mrinal_242yr
    Posted

    I was excited and thought something new is there to read. but after 100+ chp everything is related to beast taming. some Arc even copied completely like the arc where the MC has to light up the stone mosuleum, I have read a similar novel way back. I am in 250+ chp but it's completely turn into beast taming. he don't even use his rune to fight. Not a single once I saw him using TIME Rune.

    altalt
    Shock! The Spell Is In English!
    Fantasy · Soy Sauce-San
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  • Mrinal_24
    Mrinal_242yr
    Commented

    So much of grammatical mistakes.... it's so difficult to read.

    Ch 18 Chapter 18
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    The Strongest Sect of All Times
    Action · Kingchitransh1
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  • Mrinal_24
    Mrinal_243yr
    Replied to Pool

    I feel gross too ....which sister and brother relationship is like that. my poor brain

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    Cultivation Pet Shop
    Eastern · DXHaseoXD
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  • Mrinal_24
    Mrinal_243yr
    Posted

    I have read till chapter 20....and I'll tell you I find this novel very unique. Though I have read many novel regarding farm, but this one is unique in its own way. It's funny and intresting. I hope the author keep this novel in this way, not like the other novels which starts good but slowly become boring and repetitive.

    altalt
    Everybody is Kung Fu Fighting, While I Started a Farm
    Eastern · Oof
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  • Mrinal_24
    Mrinal_243yr
    Commented

    Zangzhou, jingzhou, cangzhou, quingzhou......give some common name for universities to remember...... it's so confusing

    Ch 39 Sacred Divine Wood
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    All My Beasts are Legendary
    Eastern · Da Yu Is Fat Again
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  • Mrinal_24
    Mrinal_243yr
    Commented

    I think the evolution procedure become very simple. He should make the materials as concoction. There should be a chance of failure while making concoction for every evolution so that this novel shouldn't look so easy. Every higher evolution, the rate of failure should be high so that it balance the whole novel. Strict mental power should required for making medicine so that the MC also improve his training. It was just my suggestion. And if you want to add game type element where you can add materials in the system window and get solution prepared itself with chances of failure with every higher level than it would be good.

    Ch 6 Lil Wan's Evolution. Cash Cow.
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    All My Beasts are Legendary
    Eastern · Da Yu Is Fat Again
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  • Mrinal_24
    Mrinal_243yr
    Commented

    Why some of the universities name are so similar.... it's confusing. please have some simple name which is easy to remember.

    Ch 3 Time's Up
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    All My Beasts are Legendary
    Eastern · Da Yu Is Fat Again
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  • Mrinal_24
    Mrinal_243yr
    Commented

    I have read about spirit stone in so many novels but this is the first time someone trying to do experiment on one...

    Ch 85 New Research direction
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    Re-Birth of a Genius. Creator/Destroyer
    Fantasy · Suryaboddu
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  • Mrinal_24
    Mrinal_243yr
    Commented

    As everyone is saying that the MC is getting everything easily, but I think it's due to his luck and luck is one type if strength. And I don't think he I'll get the free things all the time. So please give the novel some more time may be it I'll going to be more interesting.

    Ch 10 The Gift & A New Partner
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    Re-Birth of a Genius. Creator/Destroyer
    Fantasy · Suryaboddu
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  • Mrinal_24
    Mrinal_243yr
    Commented

    story is very good till now. the only Itsy bitsy thing that make me sour is the grammar which makes the sentence incomplete.

    Ch 10 The Gift & A New Partner
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    Re-Birth of a Genius. Creator/Destroyer
    Fantasy · Suryaboddu
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  • Mrinal_24
    Mrinal_243yr
    Commented

    the editing is very bad.... it's feels like the sentence is incomplete. sometime I don't get who is taking. I start liking this novel so I hope the later chapters have good editing and translation.

    This book has been deleted.
  • Mrinal_24
    Mrinal_243yr
    Commented

    Author can you use other synonym for spasm like twitch. It's boring reading the same word so many time. And why this novel revolve around sex, verginity, girl. I mean every teenage who cross 18 are desperate for sex or what. And do girls are so easy that they choose guys only with power n wealth. Don't make this novel so materialistic. A good novel can teach us moral values also. Respect women, don't show women as commodity which can be get if ur rich and famous, this is my humble request. Focus more on moral relationship...blood sister, adopted sister are same they will always be sister don't give immoral ideas to people.

    Ch 25 Was He That Sort of Person?!
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    Pocket Hunting Dimension
    Eastern · Blue Sky Washing Rain
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  • Mrinal_24
    Mrinal_243yr
    Commented

    The story started good but after 2 3 chapter the story is becoming weirder and weirder. People are jealous of seeing brother with his sister. Parents are trying to search girl for him on his birthday cause he became *****. I mean in which country this things happen. It so weird.

    Ch 7 Don’t These People Go Cultivate?
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    Pocket Hunting Dimension
    Eastern · Blue Sky Washing Rain
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