Ignore the initial stupidness of the Main characters. Everything else after that is almost perfect. I assure you. This is my review as a reader...
Typhlix
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LIKEfirst of all I still like the dumb MC...common he is in a new planet with advance tech and gadgets, so he I'll be zoning out a little. he don't have enough info about the situation he was in. But Author please i like this novel of urs after reading many downgraded novels. but don't make it in Harem. even if you creating Harem, don't add women left and right. in my view with our Dumb MC two is enough that he can handle. But I'll still suggest no HAREM.
Last_Lost:Yea the book has gotten better, had a great read the dumb MC getting smarter but still stupid.... P.S is MC gonna practice the Wolf or the Werewolf Exercise after getting the silver body ?
A hybrid huh... can the unity technique lower the requirement both legacy exercises ? does it have weaknesses like silver, religious symbols etc. once he practice it? will his element or attribute be fire or heat ? will have expectations waiting for your next releases. yeah cool and tnx for the chapter......
Typhlix:Lol, thanks and uhm... U'd be surprised if you read the recent chapter I posted
Daoist4RSgbm:How far do i have to go before mc stops acting like a belligerent child or zoning out and missing every detail around him. im at chapter 11 and i really cant stand this mc so i might just stop here
I like the premise of the story. But the translation quality is just sooo bad. Please find a way to correct this. There are words that don't belong, words missing, unfinished sentences, made-up words that just don't exist. And the structure of sentences is off in general. Please find a way to correct this. I'm at chapter 43 right now and if this is the same for the pay to read chapters then I have to drop this novel. Wich would be a pity because I like it and I would like to keep reading it .
I'm really sorry I spoilt the novel for you 😞 I will surely get an editor. And if you dropped the novel, make sure to check back sometime as it might have already been edited. Thank you !
rolle:I like the premise of the story. But the translation quality is just sooo bad. Please find a way to correct this. There are words that don't belong, words missing, unfinished sentences, made-up words that just don't exist. And the structure of sentences is off in general. Please find a way to correct this. I'm at chapter 43 right now and if this is the same for the pay to read chapters then I have to drop this novel. Wich would be a pity because I like it and I would like to keep reading it .
😭 Sorry, I only made it to chapter 12. I will go insane if I continue. I am considering to dare my friend read further than I did!
Typhlix:Lol, uhm. Read to chapter 50-60 then decide