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1) Let him have knowledge of the DxD verse- TotalHaze3mthCommentedCh 15 15. Warmth
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no
This paragraph has been deleted. - TotalHaze11mthCommentedCh 5 Chapter 5: Village Of Dragons
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Well in the few chapters there isnt much for me to review, But I enjoyed reading it so far. I hope you can do more for the world building, explain the difference, if there are no same actors, movies, shows, even songs and Singers he could be doing much more. Sell songs, and a few scripts. Copy popular books etc. Of course not too much to seem like youre stealing shit or pulling it from no where. Just Keep the best for yourself, if you're not going the director route you can throw them to mcs dad and act in some you prefer. Show more of his acting and how he improves as an actor. Maybe others reactions to him and his movies etc. Otherwise just Keep throwing out more chapters and im going to love it either way :)
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Retsu get?
Wasn't there a branch of Kidō that focused on healing? - TotalHaze1yrCommented
Yoruichi get!
"Well, hello there little kitty." I stared into eyes that held much more intelligence than a cat should. - TotalHaze1yrCommented
When you know haki better then the original author xD
Figuring out how to 'define' the mechanism behind CPO's Geppo was harder than defining Haki, but I succeeded. To all those writing One Piece Fanfics, there, now you know how it 'works.' Praise me. - TotalHaze1yrCommentedCh 5 Chapter 5
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Sounds like he wants an alert every Time she masturbates lol
"Cortana, make a program to alert me if sounds above 80db are emitted from that house. Also, program it to alert me in the case of the following keywords being said: Help, Eidolon, Spider-man, Stop it, God, Please..." After listing more than 20 words keywords I stop. - TotalHaze1yrCommented
They know too much :I
The others opted to ignore or not pay attention to Luffy's goofy antics. Sometimes they wondered if Luffy had a second brain for his wild ideas. - TotalHaze1yrCommented
I mean its obvious that narcissa is in the same situation, how can the black sisters be so dumb to not even check for it?...meh w/e
"But then one day, he was suddenly gone, finally leaving us for good, and I was finally free, as all the magic binding me failed when the person with whom it was keyed to disappeared. And that was the happiest day of my life! You cannot imagine how much it meant to me and how much gratitude I felt towards the person who had finally rid the world of that scum... I tried finding who it was, but I couldn't…. And then, I saw the wand in your hand," she said as a smile came to her face. She stood up from her seat, surprising Axel. - TotalHaze1yrReplied to UnknownMan
Not in this story I guess :)
When he got the stones, Tony hesitated. He didn't have a family to give him motivation and harden his resolve to sacrifice himself. His only friends were Rhodey, Happy, and Pepper and even then they slightly drifted apart because they all had too much work, their own families, or something else to focus on in the past five years. He also didn't think he owed the world anything. He did his best to make Earth a better place and then, he also had to give his own life? - TotalHaze1yrReplied to ElPiwo
Well probably, Just say she had to protect the kid so she Got outnumbered even though she has observation haki and should be able to deal with them it aint bad
Ryu returned home and froze as he saw Anko getting stabbed in the abdomen by a Root ninja while protecting Naruto. - TotalHaze1yrCommented
Well I like it, you finnaly changed the story a bit, even though its not enough and I can guess that this change Will basically not change canon at all until hiruzen dies and uchiha come back or even later...which is lame,and idk why they wouldnt Just go and kill hokage and the elders now...meh its fine as a chill fic But im waiting for one where you rly go off canon :/ I like your storys,But want more from them.
Ch 9 Extermination? - TotalHaze1yrCommentedCh 3 Sakumo?!
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Isnt it Taichou? Or something like that eh idc anyway
A name for Isaiah. I'm thinking Danchou (boss/ Capitan) - TotalHaze1yrCommented
An ask? 'to make a request' would be better no? Or did I misunderstand?
[The Pantheon: Somewhere, there is a nest. To reach the nest, there is a price. To make an ask, there is a price. If you so wish for misfortune to fall, just reach the nest and pay the price... This is the Gods' Misfortune.]