Thank u for a honest review

Wow! Another bad mtl translation of a chinese fanfiction with no links to nor permission from the original? This man must truly have no women on his phone.

Thank you, this is literally mtl and these fake reviewers are painting it like its the bible 2

Look, Im just gonna be honest. Even with reading the auxillary chapter and other reviewers saying that it gets better X chapters later, I cant reccomend this one. The main point of contention with this one is the Mc. Guys seems to be a normal dude who gets isekaied via bike and shoved into a otome game before being essentialy emotionally lobotomized. I understand its because of said system but my honest question was why? Yes, you explained why it happened story-wise, but why was that character shift needed? Was it really neccessary to remove the original personality so early in the story and replace it with whatever Zombie's personality is, if you can call that a complete personality? Does that add anything to the story other then frustration and removing the voice of modern history from the story? If it was Zombie with little bits of the MC poking through every now and then, that would be acceptable.As soon as MC was killed the second time, he essentially just became another,less interesting character. If you had removed the isekai elements from the story and just had him as a basic mob in the original game, there would lose essentially nothing because for a otome game setting, there are almost no Otome game elements.You coul just call it a fantasy world and nobody would notice the diffrence. If it takes 50+ chapters to get somewhat interesting or for some development to happen, and I have to pay for the later part of those chapters, then this novel is not worth it at all. Nobody wants to buy a video game that only gets good 40hrs in. If you want someone to read your book or buy your game, then that 1st impression matters the most, and this book does not make a good one.

Wait what is this? The author responding positivley to a negative review and not bashing said reviewer or deleting their review? I am so impressed with your maturity that Ill read the 1st 10 chapters even though this genre isnt my thing. Continue being mature and writing. I wish you the best

That would make sense normally, just detaching ourselves from reality. The thing is, they cant keep that up forever The would eventually just come and accept slowly. The mc here just went through all the stages in 30 seconds. Its like having someone close you die and after a small cry session you are completley over their death.

I wish that you could give awards to comments. You derserve one

Is it just me or is there a info dump in every chapter? Its starting to get a bit much

So this novel is just a off brand version of the novels extra

The point is that no one in that situation would be that well adjusted and kinda makes it feel like the author just wanted to rush through and not talk more about the characters background

garbage

The one not creepy comment. Half othe other ones sound like they would become serial rapists. Good on you for being normal and moral

Accept the friend request. The name is Cheddar. Lets talk

Trust me , this one is does not start like that.

I love this novel so much

Glad that im not the only one seeing the cracks in this story

Just a suggestion but, maybe you can try writing fight scenes in third person. I believe that it would flow better.

FUN FACT: there are actual fanfictions for the novels extra. Look the novels extra extra

This is a quest, not a fic.

I hope his crew mates soften him a little. The anayltical and cold cut way of thinking isnt as fun after ch 300