Pretty childish writing so far with all the standard cringy stereotypes however its a cool concept for a story (superman in solo leveling) and has plenty of room for improvement and should be pretty cool if done well. But still very early days atm.
SlimeSage
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LIKENp its gotten better since i wrote this. Liking the increasing action scenes just wondering if planning on doing a time skip anytime soon maybe make him about 16-18 or something. Basically just anytime around the time the start of the solo leveling plot would be great.
BRACKKUSama_z:Thank u for a honest review