bald_daoist
A bald daoist looking for cultivation for the hairless men.
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bald_daoist1yrPostedWriting quality seems ok. I did not notice any granmar error for those grammar police. Nature of the story is also interesting for me, I kinda like it. My problem is the pace of the story. It’s really slow for me. Travelling to guild foundation is more or less 100 chapters. Once they arrived, i assume there’s another more or less 100 chapters just for him to become an adventurer. Yes. That’s right. So as of chapter 250 plus, it’s still an adventurer examination. I sure hope that at chapter 300, the exam is already over.
- bald_daoist1yrCommentedCh 1059 The Empyrean Rank Unique System.
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- bald_daoist1yrCommentedCh 578 The Tournament of Champions - First Round (4)
- bald_daoist1yrCommented
He’s in Alucard persoba right? So they know that he’s Zevien?
'Zevien,' mother Helena looked back in worry, but she couldn't stop her feet. She and the kids were at the end of the group. - bald_daoist1yrCommentedCh 256 Dukes Dead, Treasure Chest
- bald_daoist1yrCommentedCh 54 Vision, Truth
- bald_daoist1yrCommentedHe placed it above his shoulder and walked through the desert towards the center of the map, appearing like a lonely traveler.
- bald_daoist2yrCommented
No wonder. King Claus wants this legacy. He will be invincible if he got this on top of his existing op skills.
[White Death: During this state, Player will be immune to Death] - bald_daoist2yrCommentedHe took a moment to observe the woman as she inspected the room. She reminded him heavily of the woman who played Maleficent in the real-life adaptation.
- bald_daoist2yrCommentedCh 741 For Asgard!
- bald_daoist2yrCommentedCh 706 I’m More Suited To Be The Devil Than him
- bald_daoist2yrCommented
Who is this old man ji again?
''Master... if you die today... I swear on my life that I will definitely ascend to the Immortal Dimension and kill old man Ji myself before I come to accompany you! Together in life, together in death!'' - bald_daoist2yrReplied to IndolentFish
- bald_daoist2yrCommented
Does this mean Eneru’s dead?
The Protectors had already torn Eneru's body limb by limb, and were about to join the battle when they noticed the Young Empress leaning on William's body. - bald_daoist2yrCommentedQiong Qi then became serious and faced the endless corridors before him. Hyping himself up, he roared: "BRUCE WILLIS, JOHN CENA, AND BETTY WHITE, GRANT ME THE POWER OF THE ANCIENT ONES!"
- bald_daoist2yrReplied to Nieka123Ch 150 Our neighbors are not too friendly Part1