A fanfic with a good idea but a somewhat unsatisfactory development, I'm not referring to the writing, but to something that most writers fail at, the world building, in this fic it feels deficient, almost as if it had no ideas for the development and ran towards the canon events to avoid thinking about this and only alter what it wants, in the same way in my opinion if you are going to introduce new characters give them more than one chapter to get to know them better, after all if you kill someone and make it dramatic, you don't feel a connection and even less some sadness for someone you've only known in a few lines, explore more the fact that he began to live with the group even years before the events, how this can change the group and the repercussions of it and don't just jump in time to the part that suits you, I hope these things don't stop you, keep trying, you have a great writing base and good ideas.

I must say that it is a decent work, a somewhat slow but stable pace, a new way of character development and timeline, the only thing I hate is Elenalise's new state (I didn't like her state in the original work either) but acceptable In everything else, I hope for more chapters.

Is it just me? or is this a damn summary of the same game? I played Vice City many times, why do I want a summary or a book about it?[img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

This is really good, if you read it you won't regret it, my only question is? This has romance (don't judge me) I think it's the only thing this story lacks to be even more incredible.

A good fanfic with a promising future, I won't say more, to avoid spoilers, read it you won't regret it.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

I'll be honest, I've been looking for a good oshi no ko fanfic, but most of them don't seem to understand the characters correctly and when they express their own vision the character is lost (in this case ruby/aqua/ai's relationship with the MC) and this fanfic is no exception. On the other hand, the author seems to be guided more by his own musical tastes, which he includes in an incongruous way. (starts singing in English and then switches to Korean) Keep it in Japanese!!! If he is successful in his musical career he will obviously evolve to sing in English... It may sound harsh, but it is true, this fanfic has good writing, but it seems to lose coherence with each chapter, I hope it is fixed, because the basic idea is fantastic.

good start, but the song he sings disappoints me a little, in my opinion there is no type of agreement with what he wants to reflect, there could be better songs that better correlate the feelings or emotions of the concert. On the other hand, is he supposed to also speak Korean or is it just the magic of the script? How does that song sound in Japanese? does anyone know?

I'm surprised that this FF doesn't have a better rating, definitely something you should read, although some of the powers seem exaggerated, they are not blatantly abused like in some other works. Totally recommended, I hope for more chapters.

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Even talented people can take a lifetime to learn an art, but no, he does it very quickly. (:V) I understand that they want to express their fantasies, but if you want to offer something different at least be reasonable in what you want to give, if the anime was already a fantasy, this raised it to a new level, in a bad way.

The story is incredible so far, is the genetic superiority thing real or not? Anyway what happened at the wedding? I need more chapters!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

It is a good work, it has a fantastic beginning, but as you progress you realize how power affects the protagonist, to the point of becoming tedious and too arrogant (Like a wuxia-style young master, but without the dialogues), I will wait Let's see how it ends :v

It's been a while since I found a good One Piece Fanfic, until I came across this one, without a doubt a good story, a constant development and visible growth in the protagonist based on effort and with a somewhat curious but nostalgic cheat. 10/10[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

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I would have liked more of a new character, but even so it is taking an interesting route without losing the R18 essence that characterizes it. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

It is a very good story, the rhythm is excellent in my opinion, only the lack of information about his previous life seems a bit strange to me, even so it is a good FF, I look forward to the following volumes.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

It is a great fanfiction, the author has a good ability to mix the worlds of Marvel and DC, the plot is very interesting and remains that way for most of the chapters, totally recommended!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

A well-structured climax and quite an emotional send-off, this is certainly a fanfiction with some soul and good writing. Thank you for this new story, because for me it is better than the original story.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

It seems that most fanfic writers don't know how to start an adventure :v I was satisfied only with the first ability :( I thought, maybe, I will interfere with the canon and look for opportunities to be more powerful or for sure experiment things with his body to power up or other things, but no, the author decided to give him more powers.

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