Charly_MadSon
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Even talented people can take a lifetime to learn an art, but no, he does it very quickly. (:V) I understand that they want to express their fantasies, but if you want to offer something different at least be reasonable in what you want to give, if the anime was already a fantasy, this raised it to a new level, in a bad way.
It's been a while since I found a good One Piece Fanfic, until I came across this one, without a doubt a good story, a constant development and visible growth in the protagonist based on effort and with a somewhat curious but nostalgic cheat. 10/10[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
A well-structured climax and quite an emotional send-off, this is certainly a fanfiction with some soul and good writing. Thank you for this new story, because for me it is better than the original story.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It seems that most fanfic writers don't know how to start an adventure :v I was satisfied only with the first ability :( I thought, maybe, I will interfere with the canon and look for opportunities to be more powerful or for sure experiment things with his body to power up or other things, but no, the author decided to give him more powers.
I don't read this type of fanfiction much, I found the world I was in interesting since I was a fan of the series for a while, I assumed that as usual this fanfiction would get out of control and it would be crazy that you could only read it by turning off your brain, but I must admit that the story is interesting, the rhythm is continuous and nothing sub-realistic has happened so far, I love it, incredible work.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I started reading this, thinking it would be bad (because of immortality and all, it gave me a different idea of what the MC would do) but, I must say, I'm surprised by the route they're taking. Excellent work [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]