Why would I leave this story just because it most likely won WPC? I simply used WPC to give it more exposure, that's it.
Then don't read any further. Just move along and try your luck with other novels. I hope you will find something you like and wish you luck in that regard!
Yeah, I want to post the entire priv right off the bat instead of delaying it till the very last moment. It's one of the reasons for why I'm taking the break. The fact that I'm going back to work in about an hour is another :_:
It is a fantasy world after all! :D
Hey! No spoilers! (kekeke) (Now you are cursed to wonder if its actually a spoiler or not, kekeke)
That's the quirk of the first person perspective I'm using. Even though the name is provided, you are the main character. So if you want to know how Peter looks, just look in the mirror :D Alternatively, look in the mirror and imagine a better version of yourself :D
Come on! Do you take Peter for a dendrofile?
Maybe yes, maybe no, maybe babe I don't know :D
You can't grow if you are already at the top. Peter doesn't start as the ultragigaalpha chad. His starts as someone extremely hurt by life and with many problems. What you are seeing in those chapters is not the direction he develops but the problems he encounters and acknowledges.
Was supposed to be batted breath, my bad, omw to fix it
It's okay man, I'm already happy people actively enjoy reading this novel. I just mentioned this while losing my mind out of boredom at work and thinking you might be one of those who use the PC to read and don't even know about priv. So, no worries and I hope you will enjoy the story (and what I've posted just now kekekekeke)
NTR is too broad of a term to say yes or no. In general, no. Will there be elements than when stretched could be considered a borderline NTR? Yes. So, let me ask a different, more fitting question. How would I describe romance in this novel? WHOLE-FCKINGANDTHEN-SOME
Trust me, there is nothing I would want more than to leave my job and go back to writing chapters. Whats more, if you use app, you will be able to unlock two more chapters that are under priv. while not much right now, once you get teased by the titles of the next chapters... xD
Im an author, so if you have any doubt, the answer is simple
not if he was about to shoot anyway, and we are not talking about distances where only a sharpshooter can aim. He died as he was about to shoot the arrow, but instead of letting go of the bowstring, it slid out of his fingers.
Its slightly rough around the edges and I plan to edit it a little, but thanks anyway. And don't worry, I only mean editing as in improving the flow, cutting large sentences to smaller chunks and generally making it more readable, the plot and the action will stay the same
The fact I didn't bring up magic doesn't mean there isn't one :D But yeah, that's a legit point I've missed, my bad.