Review Detail of ovrseer in Riches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!
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I stopped and took a break at chapter 31 I think and it’s way too much filler, the actual story hasn’t even started yet before it becomes pay to read. At this point the Author already lost a good amount of readers because the story is minimal and the filler/cheesy romance just took over. I’m not saying romance is bad, but if it’s just the same thing 10-15 chapters in a row than obviously people tend to get bored and want to see something virtually interesting. The story seemed to start off good, I liked the idea of being able to go to another world while taking items through both (like that one manga/anime), but Author kind of sold, the “cringe” chapters are happening too often and are just going back to back. Really could be a good read but I don’t know, I’ll keep reading for now and let you guys know if it gets any better.
Riches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!
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Thanks for the review man! And well, yeah, your concerns are totally valid. In my long history of writing on this site, I often ended up creating novels that were either too enigmatic or, to be more straightforward, too complex for the readers liking. And with my dislike for giving out hints for the mysteries I set up only compounding the issue, I tried my best to avoid this problem in this novel... But from the looks of it, I compensated a little bit (waaaaaaaaay) too much. In this situation, I would recommend you to continue reading with fastpasses until you get to the parts when I'm no longer holding back as much. So, if you even reach a moment when you do not feel like waiting for new FP to read the next chapter... You will have reached the parts where things get more interesting :D
