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alexny181118mthPostedHonestly, I didn't even care about the NTR in the beginning because no emotional connection was created. So I just read past it. Still, the story just isn't that good in my opinion. I think the concept is interesting but the execution needs some work. Maybe try a rewrite where you slow the story down a bit.
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This is actually a good story. Not every Hp fanfic needs to have a character that is extremely talented from the get-go at everything. Also while I can agree that certain actions from the protagonist touch on the "forbidden list" of stuff to do in an HP fanfic, I don't think it detracts from the story.
- alexny181112yrCommented
Yeah your still good. Trust me, as a regular reader of manhwa I have seen much worst quality!
Answer me honestly. Has something changed in the quality of my chapters recently? At least, in the last 3-4 chapters or something. I won't mind, I'll at least try to fix those mistakes, so please tell me if there is something. - alexny181112yrCommented
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This chapter has been deleted. - alexny181112yrCommentedCh 17 Harem, or No Harem?
- alexny181112yrCommentedCh 34 Something really rough / warning 18+
- alexny181112yrCommentedCh 125 Chapter 125
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4) White stone city - alexny181113yrReplied to Cewu
I think it's good. The app has some useful features.
This chapter has been deleted. - alexny181113yrCommentedCh 58 C58 Testing in the Forbidden Forest
- alexny181113yrCommentedCh 4 Chp 4 : L.A. Times?
- alexny181113yrCommentedCh 1 My Awful Death and a Second Chance