Review Detail of alexny18111 in Umbrus Shade, The Incredibly Annoyed Ravenclaw

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alexny18111Lv131yralexny18111

This is actually a good story. Not every Hp fanfic needs to have a character that is extremely talented from the get-go at everything. Also while I can agree that certain actions from the protagonist touch on the "forbidden list" of stuff to do in an HP fanfic, I don't think it detracts from the story.

Umbrus Shade, The Incredibly Annoyed Ravenclaw

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unknown_daoistLv14unknown_daoist

what falls under "forbidden" in your opinion?

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DaoistyQNGiXLv14DaoistyQNGiX

Telling chsracters about future events. Honestly, this fic is garbage and the MC is just a delusional moron.

unknown_daoist:what falls under "forbidden" in your opinion?

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Enlightened_RookieLv13Enlightened_Rookie

Thanks for an honest review I will now not read this garbage

DaoistyQNGiX:Telling chsracters about future events. Honestly, this fic is garbage and the MC is just a delusional moron.

1yr

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Abayomi_AtoyegbeLv13Abayomi_Atoyegbe

Are you really not gonna read this novel just, because some random stranger said so?

Enlightened_Rookie:Thanks for an honest review I will now not read this garbage

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The_reader_ofnovelLv14The_reader_ofnovel

Great novel ! Will there be a love intrest

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