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Its a great concept can't wait to read it.
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what's wrong with mikeal? Keal sounds like vegtable.
His name is not Pica, pica is the one with the high pitch voice.
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Dude it's been 15 chapters and there have been almost no interactions between the charachters. Every chapter he is monologuing about what he thinks. its a geat story but youre chapters are to shortfor al this monologuing with evrything that happend you could have just made 4 chapters. chapter 1 his death, chapter 2 his emryo face and birth, chapter 3 the reactions to his birth, and chapter 4 the conflict with the wolfs.
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