It’s disappointing you dropped this. But it’s a pretty good novel. I’m glad you didn’t delete it. I write as well and I like your writing style so I read to learn from it. To improve my own.
I‘m taking the time to write this review because I really like this novel. The story is really good and very well written. I don’t really like how selfish the main character is but other than that everything is good would definitely recommend reading.
Minato isn’ strong enough when his comparable to Hashirama at his current stage doesn’t make sense at all. He would be very useful in this situation and to teleport normal people away.
This novel is intriguing and has a very good start. I would love for you to continue this novel. Honestly haven't come across something this good in awhile.