Devang98
Yo, I love reading fanfiction or story with mc whom I can relate to, like one with common sense.
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Devang9827dCommentedMa'am or madam
"Hello mam, i want to inquire about memberships for month."- Devang9827dCommented
dude!!!!! basic grammar please!!! don't make such basic mistakes it's embarrassing.
"Lets spread rumor about this meeting as Tatsumo Said. And let Tatsumo handle boy, he will teach boy basics and let boy take it further. Every one has different path and As Tatsumo describing him, We will have scary samurai in between us fast enough." - Devang981mthCommented
ma'am or madam
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what kind of image of India do you have in your mind😂
Amy smiled at the mention of her original name. She was currently in Kolkata, helping the sick and injured in the small town she was in. Today wasn't her first time here. This region was impoverished, and the people had a tough time getting medicine and doctors. - Devang982mthCommented
jhoto not sinnoh
"In an unexpected turn of events, Archer's Electabuzz, which is a Sinnoh's electric type pokemon for reference, people. It has unleashed a Thunder attack of unparalleled intensity on Flint's Geodude. The suddenness of the strike left both Flint and Geodude wide-eyed, disrupting the anticipated flow of the battle." - Devang987mthCommented
it was an Indian who discovered surgery 😅
Orochimaru couldn't help but smirk. In his previous life, traditional Chinese medicine was the oldest medical system globally, especially in the field of surgery. It had even developed anesthetics nearly two thousand years ago and performed craniotomies. - Devang989mthCommented
and then suddenly there was a blast 😂😄
Enid was clasping her hands together and praying for our success. Next to her, Sam Obisanya was also praying, but in the muslim way of praying by raising both of his hands parallel to his chest. - Devang9810mthCommented
cringe
"Alright, then let's do this, together!" - Devang9810mthCommented
mob hota hai chutiye
'This is clearly a Mod who went crazy with power!' - Devang9810mthReplied to E_M_E_R_A_L_D
toh maine kya bola chutiye 😂
He saw the birth of Indra and the other God's. Then he also saw Vishnu smiling at him which caused god to smile as well. - Devang9810mthReplied to ScarletQC
mine was way funnier and darker
The action figures give a clue, there is a Darth Vader and others that I recognize, but there are others that I do not. Where there should be a 60cmx100cm Superman All-Star poster there is a Captain America one. - Devang9811mthCommented
ma'am is right spelling
"Yes mam." I said. - Devang9811mthCommented
i just dodged a bullet because i would have regretted it, if I had read this and later learned this is the harem (loser) genre.
MC Love Interest: - Devang981yrCommented
try using punctuation
He quickly noticed that Nami was missing, which meant that she was most likely alone on the ship at the moment. He was quite familiar with how things went in the original so while the crowd's attention was drawn by Patty's punch on Gin's face Usopp used that opportunity to board the Going Merry and climbed the top of its mast to sit on the crow's nest so that Nami won't find him. - Devang981yrCommented
really, how old are you 12 ?
Plop…plop… (sounds of things falling as Mc's clumsy hand reached for his phone)… - Devang981yrCommented
so this is a translated novel huh well thanks i will try to look for the original now.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Devang981yrCommentedHe saw the birth of Indra and the other God's. Then he also saw Vishnu smiling at him which caused god to smile as well.
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Hindu mythology came way before Christianity you can google that
He saw the birth of Indra and the other God's. Then he also saw Vishnu smiling at him which caused god to smile as well. - Devang981yrReplied to Jhon_0667
teri maa randi hai
So it seems that a lot of people are upset about how dark the story is, but that's not gonna change, not until around chapter 80 when Yovan starts to overcome Limitless.