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2017-06-02 JoinedAndorra
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    Mute22h
    Commented

    Poorly written, even more poorly translated, 20+ mistakes every chapter, frequently misgendering characters, this is clearly machine translation.

    Ch 20 Who Dares To Provoke Me?
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    The Whole World Awakened: My Clones Are Everywhere
    Magical Realism · Urban Cloning Power
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  • Mute
    Mute22h
    Commented

    ?

    "Other than these two students, look at your talents. What do you all have? He's the worst student I've ever taught!"
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    The Whole World Awakened: My Clones Are Everywhere
    Magical Realism · Urban Cloning Power
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  • Mute
    Mute22h
    Commented

    he said this, the teacher..

    As soon as she said this, the scene instantly exploded. Everyone's gaze fell on the cold woman. At this moment, she seemed to be the center of the world.
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    The Whole World Awakened: My Clones Are Everywhere
    Magical Realism · Urban Cloning Power
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  • Mute
    Mute22h
    Replied to RedLotusIV

    This was poorly explained even by fantasy novel standards, like 3 different reasons for humans evolving all thrown together.

    A thousand years ago, an unknown alien race invaded this planet. The entire solar system was attacked by a huge storm, and the Blue Star they were on became thousands of times larger. In order to survive better, many creatures began to evolve.
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    The Whole World Awakened: My Clones Are Everywhere
    Magical Realism · Urban Cloning Power
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    Mute3d
    Replied to Tetractys

    I see, i don't have priviledge so while i can see the comments i can't see author note until it's been released for all.

    Ch 550 Separating Huyang (1)
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    Astral Apostle
    Video Games · Uniform Armor
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  • Mute
    Mute4d
    Replied to Tetractys

    So this wasn't actively being updated by author when it was picked, or is the hiatus recent?

    Ch 550 Separating Huyang (1)
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    Astral Apostle
    Video Games · Uniform Armor
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  • Mute
    Mute10d
    Replied to Daniel_Martinez_8972

    Ofcourse there was going to be martial arts, but i expected the author to give a valid reason for why martial arts matters so much in this world.

    Ch 2 Everything Is Difficult at the Start
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    Martial Arts Master
    Martial Arts · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Mute
    Mute11d
    Replied to Flammenwurfer

    Yup and since he's editing the MTL, he should catch them and fix it.

    Ch 40 Reward
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    Immortal In The Magic World
    Eastern Fantasy · Blue And White Ocean
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    Mute14d
    Commented

    This is really bad, shame it is most viewed currently. The premise is bad, but beyond that nothing about this world seems realistic, nobody acting like people in their positions should act, everything just feels boring.

    Ch 20 Killing the Faceless Monster in the Qi Gathering Realm, The Shocked Night Patrolman
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    I Became Invincible After Getting Rejected For 100 Times
    Magical Realism · Fang Zheng
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  • Mute
    Mute14d
    Commented

    Why is this trash that was instantly beaten still speaking.

    Zhao Delong also laughed coldly,
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    I Became Invincible After Getting Rejected For 100 Times
    Magical Realism · Fang Zheng
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  • Mute
    Mute14d
    Commented

    He had to.

    He had confessed his feelings to the school belle, who was giving a speech onstage behalf of the student body.
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    I Became Invincible After Getting Rejected For 100 Times
    Magical Realism · Fang Zheng
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    Mute15d
    Commented

    Last chapter it said that and sword saint are pure cultivators.

    The heavy cannoneer was the top fighting profession among mixed cultivators.
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    Drawing Cards With My Lifespan: Starting By Gamifying Reality
    Video Games · Pears Are Fragrant
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  • Mute
    Mute15d
    Commented

    Making a joke about rape? Classy.

    Sometimes, it would be a woman being supported by several men, a man being supported by several women, or a man being supported by several men.
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    Drawing Cards With My Lifespan: Starting By Gamifying Reality
    Video Games · Pears Are Fragrant
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  • Mute
    Mute15d
    Replied to Lonelytree

    Also keep an eye out for the ranks changing randomly, earl/count changing on a paragraph by paragraph basis.

    Ch 40 Reward
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    Immortal In The Magic World
    Eastern Fantasy · Blue And White Ocean
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  • Mute
    Mute15d
    Replied to Lonelytree

    Or alteast do a better job editing, add some capitalization and actually read the chapters and see if they flow properly.

    Ch 40 Reward
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    Immortal In The Magic World
    Eastern Fantasy · Blue And White Ocean
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  • Mute
    Mute17d
    Commented

    So anyone reading this able to tell me if the power levels have increased? Read it in trial read and while good, the superpowers felt quite weak.

    Ch 423 Subconscious Modification (1)
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    The Great Genetic Era
    Eastern Fantasy · Pig Sanbu
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    Mute18d
    Commented

    Translation is really bad, i expected better from lonelytree but this reads like slightly edited MTL, the novel itself is quite boring and poorly written, every side character is flat and forgettable and the interactions with people are boring.

    Ch 40 Reward
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    Immortal In The Magic World
    Eastern Fantasy · Blue And White Ocean
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  • Mute
    Mute18d
    Commented

    By tamed the horse, he meant clamped onto his back while the horse tried but failed to throw him off? It's not like the horse went docile...

    Moreover, from the red-haired student's words, he also knew that he had tamed the horse, but the horse suddenly went out of control. This was undoubtedly a little suspicious.
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    Immortal In The Magic World
    Eastern Fantasy · Blue And White Ocean
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  • Mute
    Mute18d
    Commented

    sideburns..

    The mental connection made the wild horse involuntarily approach Eli slowly. Even when Eli touched his head, there was no reaction at all. Then, he felt Eli directly pulling on his sideburns and using force to get onto the horse's back.
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    Immortal In The Magic World
    Eastern Fantasy · Blue And White Ocean
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  • Mute
    Mute18d
    Commented

    "it"

    It jumped up and tightly clamped the two sides.
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    Immortal In The Magic World
    Eastern Fantasy · Blue And White Ocean
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