ApexPen
Review: so many good novels have come out recently. makes me upset this one doesnt have 1000 chapters so i can binge. This novel from start to 168 has been astonishingly good. From characters to enemies and world background even thought process has been top tier quality. the last time i reviewed a vrmmorpg this good it was cultivation online and i wholly believe this novel will surpass it. Based on current chapters i give this a 10/10 which i have rarely ever given. I recommend everyone to give this novel a chance and cant wait to see where this novel leads.
Pretty incredible work here, especially for something so early in. I primarily have nothing but praise for this novel, I mean, I binge read it faster than I do most else. But really this story has had such an incredible progression, the writing quality feels top notch (for the site), and it just feels like this is the start of something great. My main positives: I love the pace here, MC progresses fast, maybe a tad too fast at times, but never too slow Only 230 chapters in and the scope of this world already feels so vast, and if it’s properly explored, will be incredible (SERIOUS props to author on this). Cool enemy and game design and great setup for many future plot lines. Those are the just the huge positives but there is dozens more, now here’ just the most minor of qualms: Slightly concerned about introduction of unused characters, some of them are awesome,but many feel as though they’l serve a purpose and never be seen again MC hasn’t a ton, but I do suppose this can be excused considering there’s quite literally a trait on his soul dedicated to seeking his revenge :P. Anyway, short for time on this review but INCREDIBLE job, can’ wait to see where this goes!
Welcome Back @ApexPen. I'm glad this novel is continuing again. So many good novels have stopped updating in the past months that it has been depressing. Please keep writing as it always feels sad to see an unfinished story. [img=update]I'll give a [Short review] as I don't usually write reviews before the 1000ch mark because that's where most stories go downhill in quality. [img=angry]The story is great so far. Still within the game-world genre that's become quite common now but the story has an edge in still being robust and not going out of hand like many other similar stories have. The characters are really good with many relevant characters that stay around to accompany the MC on his journey. The story is still young with 400 chapters so far so it's hard to judge if the side characters will still be treated with the same care later on but I sure hope so. [img=recommend]The world is nothing groundbreaking at face value as it shares many common aspects with similar stories in the same genre but there is still uniqueness and special characteristics to the world in this story. It feels fresh and there are always things to discover and be curious about. [img=thinking]The story stopped for a few months without any announcement or explanation which was sad. To be honest, I don't really care if an author wants to take a break. In fact I welcome it. Authors are human beings after all and we all get burnt out from repetitive actions. People working in the creative field are even more prone to burn out as they always need to produce content that satisfies many readers and if the quality drops even a little, not only will their product take permanent damage, but the negative reviews from their very followers/fans won't be merciful at all. So taking a break and coming back with a fresh mindset is always welcome in my book. My target is to have a great story to entertain me in the end. However, I'd really like it if the author would issue a statement about the break giving an approximate period or a goal for the break to end. Maybe elaborate a little on the reason. That would make the loyal readers more content, and will give us a goal to look forward to when the break is over. Still I'm happy the author is back and regardless of the reason for the haitus, I hope all is well. Looking forward to more chapters.[img=proud]
Truly, I love this novel. The author does a phenomenal job in every aspect, except updating chapters. Granted writing is not easy, and most chapters contain far and beyond more depth/detail than most novels on Webnovel. However, I can't support purchasing privilege for this every month. 4 chapters a week is dismal as it is, but the author can't keep up with that either. All in all, I think the author and story are great. And I wish this novel the utmost success. Just needs a littl3 bit of tweaking or at least updates for fans.
THANK YOU AUTHOR I JUST FOUND THIS NOVEL AND I LOVED IT AND I WAS SAD IT DIDN'T HAVE ANY UPDATES AND THOUGHT IT WAS GONNA BE ANOTHER SHORT END TO A GREAT NOVEL BUT YOU HAVE RETURNED AND IT IS GREAT LUCK FOR ME. Yelling probably wasn't necessary but this is a very good novel it's pretty fast paced so far got info dumps here and there but what great story doesn't everyone needs to know what's happening best of luck to the author and I look forward to the rest of the story
I don’t normally write reviews but this story is heat fr Writing Quality - 5/5 Grammer is solid, sentence structure and story quality are all excellent, never been disappointed with the writing! Updates - 4/5 Consistent enough, always wanting more however. Story Development - 5/5 Definitely does an amazing job with the development of the plot, MC never seems too OP for the situations he finds himself in. Introduces things as needed and fleshes them out very well. Character Development - 5/5 Getting to see Kirean’s personal growth and how his attitude develops throughout the story is great. Does a great job making the side characters feel like individuals and not just card board cutouts with no personality. Almost every character is enjoyable! World Background - 5/5 No question about it, as we learn more about the world both in game and out it gets more and more interesting. Seeing how things will play out in the grand scheme will be truly glorious. All in all, this story is well worth a read, and it only gets better as you move along.