What happened to mc not being able to lose his memories due to his fathers wish before but now loses his memory on a wish..

I also forgot to mention that on average about 3or 4 pages of every chapter later on his just repeating the last few pages of the last chapter and only half of the chapter is actually new so you’re already paying for 9-10 pages but only get about 5 maybe 6 pages a chapter to read.

Review at Ch. 489 The novel started off fantastic and was an interesting take over a game world and I was hooked up till chapter 300. After that the quality goes to s*** everything with a name EVEN THE MC or cities or mountains or bandit groups will have their names randomly changed for the whole chapter. “He” and ”she” constantly get mixed up, full chapters where mc gets called “she”. Not to mention how much money he has made or was offered changes repeatedly. The background makes ZERO sense. he gets stronger from the game and then realizes there is super humans also hidden away from society (cliché but ok) then every major discovery he makes always gets cut off at the end right before he finds out or he doesn’t pursue it so he never figures anything out. mc legit finds his parents and learns about why he is an orphan AND FORGETS IT so there is wasted chapters because in the end he never figured anything out. Becomes worried and tries to become stronger and wants to find a path to break through the level cap..instead plays on an alternate character in his free time and once again discovers nothing and the mysteries keep piling up never to be solved. If you decide to read this novel you will most likely see my chapter review complaints. Review summary: Grest at first, good potential but gradually got worse in all aspects and I can’t even justify spending money on the last 25 chapters or so to finish up the current released. Get out while you’re ahead because he obviously doesn’t care about his novel anymore.

You have screwed up the names so bad it’s ridiculous. The review is getting worse

Once again the names have changed, going to be a lovely review at this point.

All the names are getting messed up and he is becoming “she” constantly now.

4/9 pages was a repeat.. Up to chapter 300 was fine but after that it’s been slowly getting worse with chapter content

2-3 pages of each chapter wasted repeating previous pages, extremely short chapters at this point.

I am also very confused

60 kph highway? That’s the speed of a school zone Author

Thanks for the chapters!

Majority of the chapter was repeated lol

Hundred* see author? I fix my grammar mistakes.

The worst translation I’ve ever read. You can’t even understand whose male or female after awhile and there will be whole chapters where the character is a she then all of a sudden a he so you have no idea who they are even after a hundrend chapters. You can’t even understand whats going on either down the line. Worst “translation” I’ve ever seen, A chicken can translate better than this and it can’t even figure out why it crossed the road.

Review: I really enjoyed the novel up until around chapter 150, there was a couple of things (mainly skills) that was skipped over and never introduced then suddenly used but okay nbd. The big deal came when all of a sudden the novel is being rushed and everything being skipped over and nothing before was explained even though it’s supposed to be mysterious it was just terrible and after chapter 200 of me waiting to see if it ever slowed down (it never did) i’m giving up and dropping because everything is so fast paced, no real interactions with other characters and just bleh.

Question here because maybe I missed it, does he have to be tan years old to enter the sect and he went right after his birthday because the trip took 2.5 months and then a 7 month time skip and he still says he is 10, hopefully he actually gets older and this isn’t a novel where the mc is just a kid for 1000 chapters

You know, I like the descriptions and all but something did feel a little rigid but first chapter no complaints. What I did like and gave me high hopes was the authors comment about not having resources and lack of time but asking us readers to point out mistakes and he will try and fix them. Hopefully he stuck to that because I enjoy knowing the author goes the extra mile for us readers.

UGHH such a amazing novel and I am so mad at myself because I did not realize this is a sequel and did not read the first one about Rudra and I regret it so so much now/: it just won’t be the same to read the first one after this one UGHHH. 9.9/10 .1 off because the coincidence of both MC and Asiva going to the military and the vampire lord’s son who is obsessed with Asiva is now being forced to go also..just felt SO forced and cliche sorry Author):

Man it would be great to get to the point and not actually read about the mc and not a bunch of chapters of side characters fighting

Not begging, The author acknowledged the mistakes, corrected them or in the process of correcting them and pleading for his previous mistakes to not affect the reader’s view of future chapters and encourages him to give it a try. I’d rather see this in the reviews than an Author who reads the complaints and instead of fixing them or preventing them, just insults the readers.