FelRhyn
Hello fellow Webnovel readers, Author here with a shameless 5 star self review as is tradition. I began reading reading webnovels about 2-3 years ago and fell in love instantly in part due to the sheer length of webnovels. I am a man with entirely too much free time so 2000+ chapters gives me days of entertainment. About a month ago i began writing about an interesting world/universe idea for a novel and before i knew it the world building notes were almost 50 pages long before i had even written a word of the actual story. I am still fairly new to writing so feel free to criticize, as it will only help me improve. Anyway, i hope you all enjoy this world that i have crafted and if you have any questions feel free to ask!
"Here master eat some more, you need more muscle to become a great warrior oink!" Orc lady "Master, you don't need muscle to marry me!" Erit "I already holded master naked body!" Teek "Master is a great man, he can have many wives!" Erit "Oink" 😁Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp
Great story so far, really looking forward to this one. Especially the extended development of his necromancy magic. Everything just seems so new and fresh from your standard undead story. Please keep up the good work and always strive to complete your work of art. As long as there are chapters you will have a dedicated reader.
I really liked the story and the fights, the character's skills are very well explained which makes reading very realistic without those boring lapses of power when the protagonist needs it. I didn't understand why you stopped posting out of nowhere, I really hope you come back because this work ended up becoming one of my favorites for being realistic and also because I always like necromancers
All I can see is a person being used as a test subject. Nothing more. I would rather live in wild than with people who doesn't even tries to lend a hand and makes me go through such pain of one's soul getting torn apart repeatedly even when I am too weak( the person even said earlier that I might die anytime as my soul fire is just a flickering flame.). The father just makes the already weakened man to tear apart more of his soul until he collapses and wakes up to the smell of food. And after that they talk as if everything is normal and it is just another day. A human who feels pain will stop even if someone is telling them to keep tearing thier soul apart. And the mc in the story is just following whatever is being said to him to the word.. he doesn't have any other interaction.
dear author.. i haven't read your story but i will. I'm here to tell you that a novel with the same name have appear years before you in royalroad. good thing is there completely no similarities between novels since ive read the previous one. sadly it might affect some of your readers. im not here to judge a book before read. just telling you about your novel similarities with the one in royalroad. anyway.. good luck with your novel.. will read it as soon as possible.
Great story :) .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................