From what I've read so far, our antagonist is an idiot. The current cultists cause makes no sense, and he's quoting Charles Baudelaire about a devil. But has nothing to back his evil theories. Like he prefaced nothing to leverage his devil claims, just air quotes and some flavor text. Also you have super computer x100 ai's, multiple of them and a known group of non conformist imperial citizens. With complete control of both cell signals, cctv, old school internet and satellite coverage. With non of the old school government laws? this should be a cake walk. Not to mention all of these things x100 in time dilated vr space. Dude would need to literally be living under a rock in the artic circle to not be found. heck they found bin laden with good Ole satellite and basic wet work and he was in a basement for years afraid to see the light in fear of the eye in the sky. The whole mini ark so far has been a disappointment.

The writing quality is consistently good, grammar and sentence structure keeping up with supreme standards compared to 90% of stories on this platform, very little editing would be required to fully publish this. The updates are timely and feel right with just enough time between each update. Story development and character design are following a pretty good path with very real choices I feel the MC has to make to develop in this type of environment. As fanfictions go, I honestly didn't see myself enjoying a walking dead one as this is literally the only decent one there is. But I have come to enjoy every moment of reading penny build something from nothing and the challenges of the original story / some of the author's own twists and turns. I would like to see a little more original content but I realize the story really hasn't really exited it's initial setup. Anyways, take all my power stones author and keep up the good work.

Ok, so I don't normally write very many reviews but i felt like there needed to be something said. The author clearly has zero thoughts other than the basic plot of the story of modern family. He has very few inserts of the actual MC, its like he gets all these gifts from the gacha but doesn't know what to do with them. The grammar is terrible, tons of he/she mix ups, miss spellings and poor word choice (Reads like it was machine translated) The story development is also terrible, if you hadn't watched the show half the time you seriously can't infer what is going on in the story, it also cuts out all over the place when you expect more development. This coincides with the world background, without the show, there is none. So watch the show side by side while reading to really get a sense of what's going on. The MC is the least fleshed out character of the whole story.

Bellatrix Andromeda and narcissa are blacks not malfoys

fix this

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house bones, not bones house.

its about censorship, if you add propaganda its more likely to get published online, otherwise it will be squashed by the government.