Review Detail of FelRhyn in World Seed
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Hello fellow Webnovel readers, Author here with a shameless 5 star self review as is tradition. I began reading reading webnovels about 2-3 years ago and fell in love instantly in part due to the sheer length of webnovels. I am a man with entirely too much free time so 2000+ chapters gives me days of entertainment. About a month ago i began writing about an interesting world/universe idea for a novel and before i knew it the world building notes were almost 50 pages long before i had even written a word of the actual story. I am still fairly new to writing so feel free to criticize, as it will only help me improve. Anyway, i hope you all enjoy this world that i have crafted and if you have any questions feel free to ask!
World Seed
FelRhyn
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Ah, i see you too are a man of culture. lol Due to the nature of the story, especially way, way later down the line it'll most probably become a harem. It's still early in the story but we've seen that he finds Sera quite attractive however right now that's all it is. He is more concerned with his memories and growing stronger. As far as romance goes i want to try and portray a little bit of a more realistic romance and not just instantly fall in love with every pretty woman he comes across. So we'll get to see Aerwyn grow with possible love interests as the story progresses.
DragonkingKyo:is this going to be a harem?(hope so) or any romances?
The way you write interests me but there is sadly not enough chapers for me to binge read. Till then I will save you work. Also i'm not really a huge fan of harms any more because of abuse of the subject lately. Yet, I do approve if harm isn't filled with one sided brain dead characters. Make them uneque and intresting like his harm is filled with a bunch of monsters that just took human form temporarily. Let one of the woman be a decomposing corps filled with worms and magets that she uses to fight with. Another could be an old powerful wrath with a voice that makes people go made when they hear it. You can do so much please don't become another basic ***** with tastless characters. I too am a book writer i'm writing a book called Unusual World. Look at it if you wan't leave comment if you like or what ever you want. I advocate for pure evil if you walk a similar path then you do not walk it alone. FOR THE DARK LORD, FOR THE HORDE !!!
Yeah i agree completely. I was just talking in the writers Discord yesterday about how i dislike stories where the females become useless one dimensional characters after the MC woos them. The harem in this story will develop over a long time and for the most part there is a sort of power cap in the world. There will be no mages one shotting entire armies with tier 10 spells(maybe 1-2 BBEG's later on but it won't be a reoccurring theme), thus important side characters can stay relevant and gain other types of strengths that will help our protagonist along his journey. This novel will very much be an army/kingdom building novel with lots of focus on the world/s around them.
Loyalscum:The way you write interests me but there is sadly not enough chapers for me to binge read. Till then I will save you work. Also i'm not really a huge fan of harms any more because of abuse of the subject lately. Yet, I do approve if harm isn't filled with one sided brain dead characters. Make them uneque and intresting like his harm is filled with a bunch of monsters that just took human form temporarily. Let one of the woman be a decomposing corps filled with worms and magets that she uses to fight with. Another could be an old powerful wrath with a voice that makes people go made when they hear it. You can do so much please don't become another basic ***** with tastless characters. I too am a book writer i'm writing a book called Unusual World. Look at it if you wan't leave comment if you like or what ever you want. I advocate for pure evil if you walk a similar path then you do not walk it alone. FOR THE DARK LORD, FOR THE HORDE !!!
I am just saying this because I read something you wrote, but have you heared of world anvil. You said you wrote out 50 pages so that site will let you organize your story and helps you create your own map. I was thinking of using that for my bookcalled Unusual World but then I realized it wasn't quite suted for world anvil.
Nope, never heard of it but i'll definitely check it out, thanks! It should help as right now my notes are a mess lol.
Loyalscum:I am just saying this because I read something you wrote, but have you heared of world anvil. You said you wrote out 50 pages so that site will let you organize your story and helps you create your own map. I was thinking of using that for my bookcalled Unusual World but then I realized it wasn't quite suted for world anvil.
NUUUUU! đ There are always, ALWAYS problems with harems. All the jealousy that goes unwritten, the time and effort you have to spend hanging out with them instead of training... *flops*
FelRhyn:Ah, i see you too are a man of culture. lol Due to the nature of the story, especially way, way later down the line it'll most probably become a harem. It's still early in the story but we've seen that he finds Sera quite attractive however right now that's all it is. He is more concerned with his memories and growing stronger. As far as romance goes i want to try and portray a little bit of a more realistic romance and not just instantly fall in love with every pretty woman he comes across. So we'll get to see Aerwyn grow with possible love interests as the story progresses.
