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i would say i enjoyed this novel till the latest chapter (i.e 67) . and yeah there are cliche but the thing is every novel has it. for me this novel is enjoyable and the update rate is constant( big thumbs up to the author for that) and also mc unique ability is op the thing that irritates me is that mc doesn't adapt to the medival environment in the Beginning chapters but i can see that he is changing too.
This novel has some weird inconsistencies in it. These could be fixed if the author tries to flesh out the story information more and put more thought in their world building and word choice. The story has a relatively fast pace and this seems to be caused by the lack of thought the protagonist has. The protagonist doesn’t seem to observe the world he is in well and this is confirmed by the lack of his use or the author’s lack of including the protagonist’s use of his “Apraisal Skill”. Furthermore, a good amount of the novel takes place in the protagonist’s head (his thoughts) rather than descriptions of the world of the novel. I personally like the concept the novel is based upon but the rest of the novel is subpar so far. (I’m around 20 chapters in.)
It's not bad, yet another harem novel with a twist, but the MC feels more like a 12-13 year old than a 25-year old man. Adjusting to new culture is one thing (ex. adverse to killing), but lacking common sense just to have cliche encounters tends to get annoying. However, if you like beta MC's this novel could be your cup of tea.
The protagonist is just terrible he drools after every girl and can't get out of the "EaRtH MiNdSeT" so he doesn't kill people coming to kill him and just makes more problems for himself the world is nice and interesting and the writing style is great just the events and the protagonist are terrible to make matters short this book is just a problem solving book some thing happens to mc then mc wins the he makes a stupid decision and makes more problems for himself then he solves those problems that is the book in a nut shell
So for starters theres no real description of the world just that its a "cultivator world" pretty much all the info you get, i always give new books i try about 25 - 50 chapters before i trully drop them but i couldnt even make it to 25. dropped at 20, MC is Beyond beta its pretty sad i understand not have experience with women but this is beyond that by a lot, it feels more like this is a 13 yr old boy going thru puberty. You had a good idea coming in but ruined it by how your mc is. and technically if he has maxed out mental fortification he shouldn't react like a 13yr old when the dumb cliché things happen. conclusion do not read if you hate Beta MC's read if you enjoy reading about Beta Mc's.
intriguing system .. well written .. hope mc uses his system more and author clearly explains cultivation levels , world background and levels ,powers . Mainly everyone goes for system levels for quick pace story, clearly visible stats and levels .. which author needs to work on ...MC has max level appraisal .. but never uses it even when he meets new people now thats just dumb , but system recently got upgraded lets see whats ahead chapter 70