So for starters theres no real description of the world just that its a "cultivator world" pretty much all the info you get, i always give new books i try about 25 - 50 chapters before i trully drop them but i couldnt even make it to 25. dropped at 20, MC is Beyond beta its pretty sad i understand not have experience with women but this is beyond that by a lot, it feels more like this is a 13 yr old boy going thru puberty. You had a good idea coming in but ruined it by how your mc is. and technically if he has maxed out mental fortification he shouldn't react like a 13yr old when the dumb cliché things happen. conclusion do not read if you hate Beta MC's read if you enjoy reading about Beta Mc's.
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