Review Detail of Kurijoben in With My System, I Can Even Tame Gods

This novel has some weird inconsistencies in it. These could be fixed if the author tries to flesh out the story information more and put more thought in their world building and word choice. The story has a relatively fast pace and this seems to be caused by the lack of thought the protagonist has. The protagonist doesn’t seem to observe the world he is in well and this is confirmed by the lack of his use or the author’s lack of including the protagonist’s use of his “Apraisal Skill”. Furthermore, a good amount of the novel takes place in the protagonist’s head (his thoughts) rather than descriptions of the world of the novel. I personally like the concept the novel is based upon but the rest of the novel is subpar so far. (I’m around 20 chapters in.)